All Comments on 'A Dom's Best Friend Ch. 01'

You are trying way too hard with the flip language, cute comments, etc.

Plot is incredibly contrived.

...but who cares, its erotica, right?

The problem is that I suspect you really can write pretty well, if you made a serious attempt.

Like the different POV

She needs it and wants it. We want it as well. Punish her! Severely! Five stars!

So intense! And such a perfect little start. I agree it is a tad bit rougher but I think that's what is going to bring out the contrast between Lester and "Mr. Williams" :p

Desperately awaiting more!

Oh my, it's warm in here! :)

Personally, I like it when people make an effort to be original and entertain. A sense of humor doesn't go amiss, either, even in the rather condescending BDSM readership.This is good! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story.

This is... Odd, to say the least. You say they own a massive company and are super protective, but they just let the creep and his new girl drop revenge porn and don't do anything about it?

That's... Super weird, and kind of just killed the whole experience for me, not to mention the dubious depiction of bdsm.