by unpublaauthor
Clamps shouldn't be left on all night as can cause damage to the nipples
Body modification via slow, overnight tissue death? That's one of master scott's things? Super Duper Domly Sadist Dom ought to understand the difference between inflicting pain and damage. Serious fail on his part.
Emotions are high for both of them after years of pitiful yearning and unfulfilling substitutes. You've made him super sadist from a hereditary bdsm kingdom. She's another sparkly perfect pain slut in need of rescue from the horrors of pretenders, jealous wenches and the horror of vanilla. They've found each other. Yeah! Given everything up to this point it's may be too late to say this but - don't make them into cartoons of people. Neither is perfect in their role, D or s. They may have a lifetime of knowing each other, but not in this context. He's a sadist, but is everything about sadism? She may get off on some pain and humiliation, but does that mean she must embrace everything and anything? Intense encounters with new people do not always go without problems. Problems are not always magically waved away.
Please make this more than an exhausting list of what he does to her and what she tolerates from him. Oh, and don't forget they have a whole intertwined life outside of his bat-dungeon.
This story has had me enthralled, I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love how it's told from different perspectives. I've been so drawn in. Thank you for this!
Loved how you fixed things with Lester and Megan. I'm intrigued by the introduction of Ryan. I've never read your other series but I'll check it out.
I'm really enjoying this story. I'm selfishly hoping you keep going with it! Thank you!!
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Never ever stop writing this particular story. I am so in love with this particular installment. Hell, now I want Master Scott :)
delicious story can't wait to see what they do with their week!