All Comments on 'A Dom's Revenge Ch. 01'

His response was the correct one. Now watch him fuck it all up when he takes her back... (Fuck I hope not)

I think the previous poster has that right. The first part of the story indicates he will take her back, but not in the way most of these wimp husband/slut wife stories go. She will probably be his slave, he might even snuff her out.

Decent writing, interesting concept, one that hasn't been overused yet. I await the next chapter!

I hope that he sends her to the Dr for a check up...etc. Then he can have his revenge or what ever he can figure out.

I agree with the other posters. If he does take her back, have him take her to a doctor first. Then he could do what he wants. But it would be nice if this wasn't the usual wimp husband cuckold type of story. It'd be nice for a cheating wife to get her just reward for a change.

and there will be a lot of punishment, but no suprises.

Those who enjoy revenge can sit back and enjoy, but I am

not sure that I will join you...

is the writing... I hope he doesn't "break" her literally.

Will keep waiting for the other chapters.

When she calls him on the phone he's "Richard", but when they speak at the house she calls him "David". An editor would have caught that mistake.<p>I'm baffled as to why he never filed for divorce on grounds of abandonment in two years, since he was so angry. Her share of the divorce settlement would have at least kept her off his doorstep.

This seems to be a pretty good story, but I wonder about the name change(Richard/David) and also why he didn't file for divorce after two years. I guess I'll have to wait till the next chapter to see if the questions are answered.

By presenting her as merely the shell of her former self, future revenge seems now almost pointless (the expression: 'beating a dead horse' comes to mind). Plus grammar mistakes frequently got in the way of understanding what you were trying to say.

Will wait and see, but I am guessing this will be a long complicated series of humiliations for the ex-wife. I usually find such stuff boring. Hopefully you will have some new thoughts on the theme.

Man, this is one cold story.

She left him in the worst manner and now your stated only reason she wants to come back is they are after her and she isn't motivated by any feelings for him.<P>

Now if he takes her back it will only be to hurt and punish her which may set well with the few into pain and disrespect -- or he becomes a wimp.<P>

In other words "a fine corner you painted yourself into" so I don't see you winning here writer - but then perhaps you could care less what many or most of us feel about your effort.<P>

I hope you pull it off because aside from missing an editor this was a good start scribing wise.

I gave you a 5 just for what I think may be coming. I do like my stories rough I think this may well turn out to be too rough even for me. Time will tell I suppose.

Mike S.

Why not a divorce for abandonment?

Why not a simple no way and lead her out the door, a fitting revenge?

Why bother with pure trash, that is what she now is?

Selling her in the BDSM trade would be ok, you might get a few dollars for her since she is ridden hard and put up very wet and used. Much fatter and out of shape and looking older.

This is not the woman he was in love with she is still two years ago. This woman only came to him when all of the rest of her life came to an end.

To keep her he will have to pay hers and her lovers debts to loan sharks. Then have her tested for all sorts of diseases. Brother it aint worth it, even for revenge.

You'll have to leave now," I said, getting up. She still on her knees looking up at me. She grabbed my leg, wrapping herself around it begging, "Please! Please! Let me stay the night! I beg you, I can't go out there!" <p>

Disgusted, I kicked away from her, and en evil thought came to mind. Smiling I looked down on the miserable bitch. "Your don't fucking deserve to stay here in MY home, however, you have given me something to think about and although I am still in a lot of pain and anger, I am willing to let you stay in the garage, ONLY for tonight though." <p>

She composed herself, realized that I was serious and that she had better take it as a better offer would not be forthcoming. She nodded and made herself ready. "You can pull your car in and sleep in it inside the garage." I said. "I don't want your cheating ass slut smell on any of my things." <p>

She winced and nodded a yes. <p>

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Depends how subtle or clever the author is, the story line has a certain original ("cold") touch to it. <p>

I doubt most authors who submit to Literaotica could, or would want, do a really thorough job in following through, even when a certain interesting/original is initial staked out. <p>

Most end up having the wife suck the guy (whether husband or the other guy) endlessly, and on and on and on and on, until neither author nor readers couldn't carelss what happens, since both wife and husband not only lose each other's total respect but they also lose the audience as well as the author's respect, so the story just dies with a wimper, going nowhere. <p>

Of all these sex stories, I think Scorpio44's FROM DIANE TO SAM is one of the extremely few, most intelligently written creative fiction about fantasies.

I don't usually read the BDSM stories as they are not my thing but the premise hooked me. I really liked the way you brought out the husbands pain over what his wife did and the 2nd confrontation when the wife came crawling back. I think I'll stick around for part 2. Oh yeah please take to heart the advise of those that commented on grammer and structure. It will make the flow of the story that much better.

The husband should put himself in her shoes and think what it would be like in her place he should give her another chance but he also should pay the sharks 0ff and make her sign a contract that she will pay him back every dollar back by doing sex to his friends and charge them for the use of her body.

I meant to read an erotic story when I started this but now I cant stop. The idea of this level of potential power and controll is fucking awsome. I cant wait to read more.

She calls him Richard on the phone, yet later calls him David.

I do like a good revenge and she deserves whatever he does to her. I don't really care for cruelty or torture but sometimes it is the best thing to do depending on the injury they have caused to the person they hurt.

Is the Dom Richard?

Is it Richard or David?