All Comments on 'A Dragons Dream'

It sounds like some kind of Asian influence but the names Calin and Colby aren't. Keeping with an Asian theme would have been better.

You have this in Mature when it is clearly Sci/fi fantasy. It is an interesting idea but the human/dragon sex thing smacks of beastiality for me. A better idea would be for Calin to transform into a human female for sex. And then there were the little writing errors that an editor would have caught. You DO have imagination and some skill at writing, so keep trying.

For a short read it was good , don't worry about people say Dragons and humans have mated way before people have started writing about it ,,, believe or not ?

I really was enjoying the story until he talked about rubbing a wolf's cock....after saying "WHAT" and rereading a few times, I kind of lost interest after that point.

Very impressive writing and good creativity so don't let me words influence you

It sounds like there is a previous submission to this story, but I cant find it anywhere. Did you just start this story right here or is there something im missing?

[13.12.22]

Excellent start!

11/10!!!!!