All Comments on 'A Dragon's Slave Ch. 00'

I enjoyed reading the 1st chapter of your story. It's a great start for a 1st time Lit writer and I look forward to reading the rest.

I would love for you to continue, The story line is intriguing and I wish to have more of it.

I know feedback is important to a writer, so I thought I'd give mine. This is really, really good. Your grammar, choice of words, and structuring are easily on level with many published books I've read. Most likely better than many out there.

Besides that, this story lines interest me, do keep up the good work.