by FantasyKitten723
It's a good story so far. It's just short, would be better if it was somewhat longer.
I agree it could really be longer but I love it anyway. Keep going its so different I'm hooked.
This is something that I like really well. It's different from the majority of the rest of the stories I have read so far. The chapters do need to be longer though otherwise it can make it to where people are disinterested in it. Other than that I say it is highly interesting and very well written. I hope you are going to continue with this for I will write it down and check on it once a month.
Thank you all for the comments. I hope to continue this soon. As many people know, life gets in the way sometimes but I will try to work on my stories again :)
Nice story, but you could have taken it further. Would have like to know what happens during dinner and after as far as the whole world "morphing" into animals and other species.