All Comments on 'A Dream Comes True'

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Deejay121Deejay121almost 8 years ago
Nice start ........

Hope this turns into a series. It has the making of an intriguing tale

ham_sandwichham_sandwichalmost 8 years ago
More?

You need to continue this if for no other reason than for us to discover if this woman is a cruel as she seems to be!

rdoolittlerdoolittlealmost 8 years ago
Very original

Loved it. This was memorable imagery: "one of those toys which you could knock over and they always stood up again". More please. (5)

Darkside619Darkside619almost 8 years ago
Sounds like my dreams

That was an awesome beginning. Please continue. I cant wait to read more

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