by carriesilver
..just never stop writing, there is genuine talent for eroticism there!
Can't wait for the rest of the story. Jessica.
Great story! I know it's been almost three year since you posted the first part but I would LOVE to read more!
Superb stuff, not a bum note throughout, fun characters just the right amount of detail, and an exquisitely paced tale of possibilities learned of and fulfilled. Brilliant and so so HOT!
I hope you're able to treat us to more of this.
this was a VERY HOTTT story. nice job.
more, more, MORE [please??] ...
This is well written and extremly erotic! Great job!