All Comments on 'A Dream Finally Realized Pt. 01'

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ptebadenptebadenabout 6 years ago
Continued in part two

Where is part two? It's a pitty

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Carrie, you're tops,..

..just never stop writing, there is genuine talent for eroticism there!

Can't wait for the rest of the story. Jessica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
AWESOME story!

Great story! I know it's been almost three year since you posted the first part but I would LOVE to read more!

NudyDudeNudyDudeover 13 years ago

Great story!!! Whatever happen with part two?

Bare Hugs

Nudy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
More!

Superb stuff, not a bum note throughout, fun characters just the right amount of detail, and an exquisitely paced tale of possibilities learned of and fulfilled. Brilliant and so so HOT!

I hope you're able to treat us to more of this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very erotic!!

Wooooohooo..loved it...very erotic!! Can't wait for more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
girlsRULE, guysDROOL ...

this was a VERY HOTTT story. nice job.

more, more, MORE [please??] ...

epiphany65epiphany65over 15 years ago
Loved this!

Great story! I can't wait to read more by you.

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 15 years ago
Super great! Hurry with more!

This is well written and extremly erotic! Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great!

fantastic story, cant wait to hear the rest!

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