by HunterShambles
Try again. Dare you to leave this comment up. Bet you're a pussy ass.
Not a bad story, but the dialog is kind of screwed up, and makes no sense. The sister goes to the hospital and there is no reason stated. I'd love to see the ladies become their joint husband go away somewhere and make them both pregnant.
Why was Julie in the hospital? That is a pretty big thing to not include. Are you going to continue. Why no mention of penetrating Julie's hymen. Also, didn't she suggest that she had some experience?
Still loved the series.
Think the hospital was about appendix. Think mom is getting sister pregnant...."save it for a special girl" Enjoyed the story, but look for more of their time together. MMMM
how sweet it would be. GP
Please have the guts to use your name, at least that way I could read your submissions and learn how it's done. Oh never written anything yourself, thought not. if you don't like it then just ignore it. Do not criticise in others what you haven't even attempted yourself. BTW your caps lock is on, careful people might think you're a nutter, shouting in the dark to yourself. I've had better insults than you could ever write. You need a day job so at least you get out more. And less self abuse or you'll go blind.
You should have added pegging to the story tags and I would have passed. Yuk!!!