All Comments on 'A Dream of Empire Ch. 021'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
'Normal' days for heroes

Keeping this short; quite happy to see the story continue; just noticed this new chapter. Yes, it was a bit slow, but quite engaging.

Will refrain from guessing (or at least writing down guesses) about the future of the narrative arc. People (especially Talos) are still clearly confused but at least they're working through their confusions and new roles at their own pace. I do like Tatiana/Tanya and her solid and concerned/felt attempts to ground Talos.

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All my stories exist in the same fantasy world. You can find the map of said world here: https://i.imgur.com/njRJtmY.jpg I'm currently working on 'Echoes of Spring' and 'A Dream of Empire'. The prologue to 'A Dream of Empire' begins with "Luck Pt.01 - A Chance Meeting". It...

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