All Comments on 'A Dream Vacation Ch. 05'

Chapter five in this outstanding romance story is well-written, with an engaging plot that holds the attention of the reader from the first line to the last. The story in this chapter develops at a nice steady, pace, and is never too rushed. Only with the ending in the last few paragraphs does brevity unfortunately occur.

Too bad they wouldn't have met that young couple. They could have told them about meeting at the hotel and making Jacob. Maybe Vicki could have told the girl of her before marriage adventures...