All Comments on 'A Drow's Dilemma Ep. 01: Flight'

Well, I have read a number of Literotica stories which involve characters that are Drow. Some have been good, others, not so much. Of course I must admit to holding all tales of Drow to a rather high standard, the stories by Etaski, of the Red Sisterhood of the Drow.

But this one is off to a very promising start, and I look forward to more. Excellent character introduction and development. No grammatical or spelling errors that I noticed. Please continue!

A hell of a good start to a series I would say! Well thought out and in-depth characters, each with an interesting start of a backstory, which adds to the flavor and enjoyment of the whole chapter you have written! Just one critique though; a little bit more detail on the main characters, such as height, weight, eye color, dimensions, etc. Other than that, I will eagerly await each new chapter as it drops! I hope that you do as I do and keep writing!

I appreciate the feedback and you are right, Jedi. I will add more descriptions to the main characters in the next update!

Just finished Chapter 48. I’m loving the story. Please continue.

Every now and than you discover a story on this side that is actually fun to read. I am genuinly impressed, keep up the good work

aren’t female drow all proud to become high priestesses and have unwavering devotion to Lloth?

Like the D'rizzt call out.

WARNING for later chapters: Themes/tone dramatically shift in later chapters to mass rape and the degradation of the main characters.

I liked the writing until then and the core cast's development will make you invested in the characters, but that same investment in those characters makes the shift nauseating and deeply unsettling.

Shades of J.R.R.Tolkien, a great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

i just stumbled across this story and am glad i did. Aertho, you can piss right off! Gads I feel total disgust for readers who feel they have to warn others of the 'evils' in future chapters.