by DrowsDilemma
Now that's just plain sneaky. He finally gets a chance to relax & look what happens!
Greetings.
What a great story! I really enjoy the adventure aspect; the world setting is well defined, the action scenes well written, the characters have a level of complexity that makes them realistic and credible. And the sex-laced ambiance and scenes! Again well-written and imaginative: never redundant and really arousing.
I really enjoy the progression of Selene's character. It makes her endearing . It would have been easy to make her so cliché but you deftly stayed away from that!
Great job! I look forward the devour the rest of the chapters. Keep up the good work!