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All Comments on 'A Fading Shadow Pt. 01'

by Wicked_Nightmare

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Get an editor

You REALLY need one. This was a trainwreck.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Ignore the first commenter. Your story was entrancing! Can't wait for more.

JNMCJNMCabout 8 years ago
Anonymous number two is correct.

The only thing you need to improve is ... write faster, please. :P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Loved it

Mesmerizing. I loved it.

Queen_of_TeaseQueen_of_Teaseover 7 years ago
MORE MORE MORE

WHEN IS PART TWO??

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I've been reading and writing naughty words about as long as I've had access to the internet. I have a particular taste for the taboo, the tense, and the fantastic.