All Comments on 'A Fair Punishment'

You changed her name from Sam to Kelly?

I noticed that to. I like Kelly better.

Hot story. I too noticed the name change. Too bad the scene went quickly. No continuation?!? What happens all week? To the next Friday ?

Thanks for the comments everyone, yes, I changed her name - sorry I guess I missed one. I can't see a way to edit the story once it's published to fix it?

Hadn't thought seriously about writing a second story (although I have another in a different category almost ready), it's my first time at writing erotica so wanted to submit it to see if people liked it and leave it open for a second story if they did.

It's been read quite a few times and has a successful average rating so I guess it was liked!

... written from both ooints of view.

Bravo!