All Comments on 'A Fall from the Pedestal Pt. 01'

5 stars from me. I just hope you put a queen of spades tattoo on one of those big tits as she gets blackend.

What a wonderful start. I really hope you continue, this is exactly the kind of story I'm looking for.

Congrats!!!

Thadsgood, is that you?

I love a husband who will give up his wife to a big black cock. xoxoxoxo Annette

Can't wait to read more about Laura's slow descent into Blackness

Keep it up! But don't whore her out too quickly!

And I agree. The slower, the better. Please don't finish everything in one evening/night after the club.

Enjoyed this setup. I'm excited for pt 2

Great story. Hope in chapter two her pussy is destroyed for her husband and she cries in remorse

Very much looking forward to reading the continuation.

Can't wait for part two, loved this. Please don't rush it though and don't stop too early. Would LOVE this to become some 4 or 10 part story.

So glad you're sharing, looking forward to the next one.

I think the erectile response is caused by a primal urge to regain the mate from the intruding stallion and replace his genes with yours. We each want OUR genes to be the ones passed along.

Yes! Love the story and where its going! Keep up the good work!

Hope you add more chapters real soon, What a great story so far.

Please, have Lauria change so she can become Mark's ideal woman. Make her black. WE are talking about a identity and name change. A wardrobe and style change.and ethnic cosmetic surgery.

Love where this is going, fertile white wife and an aggressive black man, perfect.

Please!!!

that's not a husband it is a pimp for his jerk=off fantasies he loves more than his wife

Great story. Please keep going or is this destined to be in the graveyard of amazing starts that just leave us waiting?

Amazing start.....can someone please pen the rest of the story if this talented writer will not? Thanks Literotica community of authors.

Great story!!!

Please continue

What a delicious tale! This story has all the elements of a first rate cuckold situation:

• Beautiful and loyal white wive who's fertile and while not interested in cheating on her husband... is at least subliminally interested in sex with a superior male

• A husband who feels "lucky" to have such a quality wife... as she's too good for him

• A husband although intimidated by superior males and was previously burned by an experience involving a black man, in an impromptu manner sets his wife up to be seduced

• The wife while eventually thoroughly enjoying her experience with the superior male, grows to resent her husband's weakness

The husband... by telling his wife's prospective black lover that the "husband" treats her badly, invites the lover to reinforce the notion that the wife deserves better, which he'll undoubtedly demonstrate when he beds her and she develops true feelings for him. The ultimate humiliation for this type of cuckold is not merely realizing that the other man is superior in bed, but rather that his own wife (biologically and psychologically) desires to be impregnated by such a superior male

You are quite a talented writer. Will be interesting to see how this adventure progresses. Please give us part 2... sooner than later.

Good start!

The best cuckold scenarios are when the dutiful and loyal wife is unwittingly set up by hubby to be seduced. In this delicious tale Hubby is setting himself up for more than he bargained for. It starts with hubby being in control, then when nature takes its course he soon finds himself unable to control things and his role as his wife’s mate appreciably diminishes. I’m often amazed how married men fail to realize that their wives have feelings associated with who they sleep with and that when they’re seduced by a superior man, they become conflicted with how they feel about hubby.

I can’t wait to see how this story develops - although I’m reasonably certain how it has to end… badly for hubby!

we are all waiting for the next part, please continue

I keep coming back to this story and need a resolution!!!

She looked like a hybrid glamour model and porno star. This is the Laura that

Mark wants for his very own 24/7. But Laura loves Tim. Well things will just

have to change won't they.

Really , wouldn't their have been the opposite reaction after his first relationship , now seeing those me were in on this together ? Once he caught them in the dance situations wouldn't he of then reached is tolerance just out of fear of loos ing her like is last girl ? Once they had kissed and his wife couldn't make eye contact , the had an excuse where not even a phone number was left wouldn't the husband of been grateful but worried this was hitting a place of no return . Once the husband started talking Huber don't you think the wife would of walked out taking a Huber just for her , leaving her mind numb twit of a wimp ads husband ?

You deserve to have to financially support all of the children that men like Mark put in their belly. You deserve a dozen set of triplets.

Go write this shit somewhere else. fucking sick of this shit

I still check back on this story every 6 months or so .......hoping to see another chapter

I'm waiting for part 2 such a long time. Do you plan to write a new chapter or will this story be forever unfinished?

there are so many questions without answers:

when boarding uber: will Mark or Tim take the seat in the front row?

if Mark sits in the back with Laura, what will his hands do?

is he invited by Tim for a drink in their house?

if so, will Tim fall asleep and let Mark have his way with Laura?

is Laura strong enough to resist the seducing black man?

if not, what will happen when Marks condom breaks?

what if he resists to take one?

will he pull out?

what will be, when he comes in her unprotected pussy?

is Laura already pregnant by Tim from lovemaking the night before?

or will they know the answer in nine months?

so many questions. only Hubbyanx knows the answers.

Hubbyanx, please don’t let us wait and tell us the anwers

Any chance for more???

Amazingly written, hopefully will be continued someday

It's a shame that it was never finished. Hubbyanx just left us all in a lurch.

need more of this :(

Had to stop at the 'big E cup tits', too big for me. I am not into such large tits, as they are so floppy, and do flop over on the side of a woman, when on her back. Ugly sight and even an uglier memory. I had to reduce my vote to 1*, sorry.

Where is the 'kaboom,' the earth-shattering 'kaboom'? Very good start, but finish the damn thing.....and quit reading these comments.

Well, it says Pt. 1, so I'm hoping this will continue. Nice start on a theme I love.

Another thought, please stop with the 10", fat as a beer can dick. It's absurd and ruins an otherwise believable story. You can still save it. Make it above average if you want and his friends were just making a far-fetched claim to impress Tim.

Great story. Will there be a part 2?

Stupid, insecure prick. There goes his marriage to a beautiful and loving wife. Probably lose all respect for him. That would be my sequel. GIving your wife to another man willingly? A seriously mentally disturbed or confused individual for certain. I'd drop such a friend out of disgust.

When I fell off the pedestal one time, my husband didn't have anything to do with it, but the G&Ts did. He was out on a business trip and I had a two day fuck-a-thon with a younger black stud I met at a hen party.

FTDS TAKE OVER.

Part II, finish it!! 5☆s though !

This is so hot. I can't wait for Part 2 and him watching his wife enjoy 11 inches!

I understand that you probably were harassed by a bunch of folks on this site that don't understand the whole hot wife and cuckolding scene. Not sure why they have This need to lash out at people for a story that they didn't even need to read.

At any rate, I would love to help you write out another few chapters if you need someone to balance ideas off of!