All Comments on 'A Fall of Semen'

Drmaxc has pnce again proved his ability with a pen. His writings are full of description and plot that keeps you reading while giving you an accurate visual in your mind. Easily the best author on Literotica.

I'm trying to imagine myself involved in a threesome, and she says, hold my husbands cock for me. With the proper coaxing, and incentive, like her tounge in my ear telling me to do it or there would be no joy in my happy sack, tonight. Or that I would be leaving any time soon. I confess to liking a hard cock, but just my own.

Good story by the way !

5* as usual, literate and erotic. Surprising and exceptional to find a word misused, though: egress means 'to leave' or exit. I think you meant ingress: 'to enter', entrance.

Wonderful story great passion hope the story continues

Sweet story, marvelously engaging. Phallic, engorged, improbable in the extreme but still vastly arousing.

"It felt good having an erection."

Nominated for understatement of the year.

Splendid

What a wonderful twist. Great tale, and great description, could have gone in many more directions

Wonderfully told. Believable, well maybe.

This was an easy flowing well constructed story. A.F.C.Somerset.

Great fantasy. Too bad Dan didn’t sneak up from behind to make a sandwich.

Good thing you never looked "up" or I would have lost my nerve watching from my balcony! Fiona is my idol!

Dr Max is certainly the master of the most unique stories on Literotica. I'm never disappointed in any of his tales. His characters are delightfully different and perpetually randy!

Fantastic! This is certainly one of the best stories I've read here. Great work!

Hello Max ... This is the first story I read after the 'Rub A Dub' series. And I'm glad I did! What a great story ... I really loved the balcony masturbation and handjob, the later sex from behind on her balcony, and the sleeping threesome! The whole story reminded me of a little tryst I had a conference once in St. Louis. Ready for another story series now; either 'Chablis' or 'Espied'; probably the latter. Thanks for being such a great writer!

Excellent story... tense eroticism. Dan was huge surprise. Thanks for the good works!

A delightful read. I've been to hundreds of meetings like this, but only once had a similar experience. I'm sure that I could not be as elegant a writer as you while describing that late night rendezvous. Looking forward to more of your stories.