All Comments on 'A Family Affair'

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prop69prop69over 6 years ago
Nice story

Looking forward to the next chapter

What a group to be a part of on a sunny afternoon

homerjayhomerjayover 6 years ago
not great

I liked the premise but agree with other comments. Too light on content and dialog.

rodavrodavabout 6 years ago
Good story...but

The story itself is exciting. But it would be great if it has a nice build up of characters and have some exciting innuendos and dialogues.

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
i liked the story

i agree with most of the other comments - i like a longer tease, not much character development - but a very solid storyline. the dialogue - where it existed - was solid. i enjoyed it a lot.

cubbies4vrscubbies4vrsover 3 years ago
Great start

I hope that you have more chapters especially with the other group still to cum. Lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Don’t like peeing on others- it’s gross!

No peeing please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Make the guys Bi and I'll be dumping load after load!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Tell us a little about yourself Joe.

Hi I am Joe. i am 40 years old, 5’10”. I weigh 175 lbs. i have black hair and brown eyes. But what I am sure most of you want to know, I have a 7’ cut cock.

Lol. Thank god. Now the story can proceed with that valuable information.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

9" soft cock and the girls took all of it erect. Bollocks

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