by flashgordon562006
Looking forward to the next chapter
What a group to be a part of on a sunny afternoon
I liked the premise but agree with other comments. Too light on content and dialog.
The story itself is exciting. But it would be great if it has a nice build up of characters and have some exciting innuendos and dialogues.
i agree with most of the other comments - i like a longer tease, not much character development - but a very solid storyline. the dialogue - where it existed - was solid. i enjoyed it a lot.
I hope that you have more chapters especially with the other group still to cum. Lol
Tell us a little about yourself Joe.
Hi I am Joe. i am 40 years old, 5’10”. I weigh 175 lbs. i have black hair and brown eyes. But what I am sure most of you want to know, I have a 7’ cut cock.
Lol. Thank god. Now the story can proceed with that valuable information.