All Comments on 'A Family Affair Ch.01'

I actually like this one. The hubbies aren't wimps. They just don't want to destroy their families. Ok, not quite sure I'm buying this one, but their take on revenge is novel. While I'm not usually a fan of using infidelity to take revenge, this was actually very well done. I'm looking forward to Chapter 2. Very intelligently written, as well.

5 Stars.

The non declared open marriage may be an answer to the wife's infedility, if you want to bring up untill 18 years old common DNA relative children. However the best revenge the new woman mate (girlfriend, wife) after divorce.

It has some redeeming qualities, but too many that simply go far beyond the realm of possibility - even for fantasy. Both these guys seem a bit too nonchalant about their wives fucking other guys. They say they are upset, but the way you have written the dialogue I am finding it hard to believe.

Yes, it is hard to believe that the husbands take it all so well, but the revenge is fun. It is pretty well thought out, but the telling is confusing at times, as to who is speaking to whom. I will be looking for the next chapter. Thanks.

It is more believable than most stories at Literotica. Good pacing and the plot makes for a good story. Keep going with it. I look forward to the next installment.

Seems it ought to be BSDM. But, regardless, its a piece of garbage.

where he was forgiving her and he wasn't a wimp then i threw up and knew it was a piece of garbage.

Everything here execpt for men who actually love, cherish, or honor their wives. Appears as if both of them are alright with the scenario as long as they can get their own piece of strange ass. Sorry dude... you get the lowest score possible.

There certainly is no high road in this drivel. Get real, if these 6 get off on doing what they are planning... why should any of the women involved wish to change their extramarital activities. What is the author really wishing to imply with this story?

Actually, kind of fun and I look forward to more. The planning was a bit crazy, but hey, it went with the rest of the story and the pillowcase bit........unreal.

Enjoyed the setup. Relished the suspense of what will happen next. Have a soft spot for trying to figure out the avenues of consequences. Hope you are not dissuaded to continue your efforts by the comments of the anonymous, myopic, provincial few.

Thanks for your effort.

he is okay with his wife's infidelity only to screw her sister as a revenge fuck. this guy Michael must pay and Lynn must pay or there is no revenge here just 3 couples switching partners.. that makes this a sick story

"this guy Michael must pay and Lynn must pay" Understand the investment by both husband however; they must feel the effect for their disrespect...hopefully there will be some redemption in chapters going forward.

While I'm not a fan out story outlining, here I think it might have helped.

HDK was right. Please take more care in clarifying who is speaking as all three wives are sisters and SIL's. Looking forward to chapter 2.

but what the hell. It is a story. Somewhat confusing but who knows how it will turn out.

This story had much of the same stylings of that master, keep up the good work!

Would someone please explain to me why people who say they hate this kind of story are actually reading it in the first place? The category is 'loving wives', so you know what is going to be here. Are they writing just to be 'published'. Seems pretty pathetic to me. Me? I read them all. Some are fun, some are not, but I don't see any reason to trash the writer.

I liked the story and can't wait for the next one!

i liked this a lot and hope to see chapter 2 soon. thanks.

A teenagers masturbation fantasy. Where is ch.2?

You really need a follow up story. Too good not to follow up with.

and that virgin cuck betrayed would know - dude is the expert on 2 things: being a cuck and spanking a tiny weenie

really needs to be continued

You are the wimp. She stepped out because she wanted a real man. She cheated before, she's cheating now, and you don't know how to react? You pussy. Jesus Christ , you wimps just amaze me. She goes out with the trash. And every friend, acquaintance and every employer get copies of the piece of shit. She can burn in hell. There's a ton of good women out there. Find one and quit wasting time with trash.

What a fucking waste of time 15 minutes scrolling through your garbage JUST STOP

06/23/13 and still no ch. 02

I hate to say it, but the middle of the first page just became too slow and cumbersome. I Just couldn't continue.

It's sad you fall into the category of the people who are like wanna-be authors. you write a partial story and expect the readers to give you a rating REALLY ? why the hell don't you either finish the damn story or at least give the readers the next chapter then maybe you will get a rating from me because as for now your story is incomplete and that puts you in the pitiful class as a wanna-be author but haven't the ability to finish a story.

All i can say about this crap.

Do you not edit this crap???? In one sentence you say it's not worth ruining 15 years over one dick, then you say but she cheated years ago..... You also have Marie doing the same thing years before, too much crap even for fiction...... Spelling and typos everywhere and it's ending was predictable even if you write another chapter.... 0**** but have to give you a 1....

.... too bad; it was becoming interesting.

What did he do with all those pictures, he has finished up as another willing stupid cuck with his brains in hi cock end, and no real revenge.

It needs you to finish part 2!

The fact that this pathetic excuse for a man would even consider staying with this bitch is fucking shit. He is a walking pussy. Pathetic.

too bad you didn't keep the story going it is getting good

You must never proof read these teenage fantasies. Go back to incest.

where is pt.2?

Where's part 2?

Finish The Dam Story. Don't stop now!!!

They took the cheaters and after giving them ecstasy etc dropped them off in the worst part of town.

They left them in panties only

Him they left in gay bar with huge dildo stuffed up butt.

Signs on all, looking for many dicks.

Scores 1/5 an unfinished story. Don’t bother reading it

I almost stopped reading when the MC didn't leave or confront his wife after discovering the pictures. I did stop when the two husbands started to talk about switching. I don't share and the thought disgust me.

hey lucky us there is no ch.02

:-D

Yay!

What an absolutely shit story. I'd hoped for a last-minute reversal that he'd actually grow a pair or at least the other one would, but i guess pathetic losers will be pathetic losers.

ok, so how many readers have asked about Ch.2?

He didn’t want to throw away 15 years just because she’s getting some dick, as decision making goes that’s pretty much the gold standard of reasons, what more would he need? Of course the simple truth is he enjoyed the experience.

Unfinished work of fiction

A big disappointment. This was written 10 years ago, and no part 2 in sight, EVER.

Should have divorced the bitch.

Such don’t leave us on a cliffhanger

The writer must have also thought this was such a shit story there was no reason to continue.