All Comments on 'A Family Destroyed Ch. 03'

As usual great story. I can't wait for the next one

Great work soul.. Keep it up I can't wait for next part

i don't understand why you are having simon fucking mom and sister when all they want is the money ? please let him realize this -it really hurts me to see this happening

I'm so glad that Simon and Amy finally fucked, I can't wait for the final part, Soul71 you are in my opinion are one of the best authors on here

Just finished reading from beginning to this last chapter. I realy like the way its playing out. Whats on that dvd is grandmom gonna tell him about the child she wanted one ir more of them to have? If so i hope he doesnt loose his sister she seems to be the only one that genuinely cares for him I think his mom does to but she seems to be si broken by her ex and brother maybe her son could be the pne to heal some of her pain. In any case love the story hope to read more soon.

just started this tonight read all 3 chapters can not wait for more........ outstanding work and really enjoy your stories!

This was a great chapter! Can’t wait to read chapter 4! It’s bugging the hell out of me that Simon hasn’t watched that DVD his Grandmother left him though! What is on it?!?! I'm also happy to see you’re reconciling Simon and his family slowly, instead of wham bam we’re a family again. Keep up the great work my friend!

I still hope he isn't going to fuck that Melody bitch, but I like the way he thinks about her and his dad.

Im kind of sad that we didn't get to read a bit about Granny and the Simon but hey if it doesn't fit it doesn't fit.

That bit about Aunt was a bit much ( not the Vid. mind you) it seems rushed.

But like I said great third part.

The torture waiting for the next chapter great job man cant wait to read how he ruins his dad and that bitch

Love it keep going

You always amaze me with amazing talent keep up the great work !!!!!!!!

LBCHOPPERS !!!!!!

I can't wait. Thank you for the great story telling.

Everytime I read a new part to this story it just keeps on getting better. I am looking forward to the next part and keep up the good work.

I have seen some negative comments but don't allow that to get you down. The story is well done, logical and it flows very well. Just stay true to yourself and the storyline. Let the twats go screw themselves.

I would like to see another chapter to this story.

I planned on it.

I'm not one that rides roller coaster, but, that's what this story feels like.

I find myself needing to defend Pamela and Amy, they're not in it for the money. They truly love Simon. Grandma knows it why else set Simon up like she did. She loved Simon. Reread the story. It's all their.

This is a great story.

pls let the bitch Melody and his dad suffer.. ( but not the child )

cant wait for part 4

Oh yes, but...that's giving out spoilers.

Can't wait for Paul and Melody to get theirs. Anyway for Melody's baby not to be Paul's?? Maybe the uncle's.? Gotta' be something wicked.....

cant wait for a new chapter.great writer all around

also just wanted to say this isn't the only series im hoping gets a new chapter for example, a son forced,family secrets, reunion and the abandoned son but i would just like to thank you for writing and sharing you stories with us hope to see something new soon.

I hope the next chapter of the amazing story gets uploaded soon

Also I hope a son forced gets continued is also in my opinion an amazing story series

I'D LOVE TO GIVE YOU A SOLID 10 STAR. BEEN LOVING THIS STORY! PLEASE BRING US ANOTHER CHAPTER REAL SOON, PLEASE! lol

Read this several times, wish the next chapter would come soon, dying to know whats on the dvd for Simon and how he destroys Melody.

What's on that DVD-CD and what is his grandmother's plan.

I hope you post a new ch soon!!!

Looking forward to your further installments

I tink you do great work i like to see the next to all the of your stories that u are working on.

Looking forward to more chapters, good story line & content.

Thank you, Cap!

Looking forward to the next chapter

His mother was between a rock and a hard place, his sister protected him, his grandmother helped him live again what's up with his aunt how will he get back at the bitch and his father and what is in that DVD does it have to do with his grandmother's scheme to bring him home.

Yasssssss finally!!! Hope him and Caroline be together, she is only married into the family.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Just wanted to give y'all a heads up, pt.4 is almost done hopefully it will be done by the end of this week.

Did Amy tell their grandmother way and how she got involved with what happened.

Cool.

Well good news, part 4 got done quicker than I thought. I just uploaded it, so it should be up in a few days.

I didn't even come for the sex but to see what happens next.

just for the record, when someone says "Thank you", the proper response should be "You're welcome", not "No problem". Other than that, it's a pretty good yarn

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I can understand screwing the aunt. But screwing the mother and sister??? That's what they want. That's not destroying them. Also, the sister screwing the grandfather, uncle, and father does not protect Dale. She was trying to keep the mother away from him. All she had to do was fuck the mother. Seems she was fucking the men for her pleasure; since she asked the grandfather if he liked sucking her tits. Everyone, except the aunt, deserves to be destroyed.

Amy is just a fucking slut. Just as bad as Pam and Melody. She didn't have to give her body to protect her brother. She could have called the cops if she was that much in love with him. Then after the adults were in jail, they could have been together. She's still letting her mother fuck her with a strap on. That screams of a slut that's only in it for the pleasure. Simon should only have anything to do with the aunt since the rest of the women are ALL sluts.

so i have seen a number of comments across this story. most seem angered by the fact that the entire family was not punished !first , the sister probably did not want her family to be arrested for incest , so used what she had to sway the mother away from the son , the mother who was used and abused by her family was looking for a way to be on the same playing field as her lover , but could not understand what that was , to her it was dominate or be dominated . i think Simon as he mentioned when he was about to die ,everything became a non issue ! comes back and realizes that Amy and his mother are both damaged and can forgive them , the real villain is the ex ! manipulated the family to accept her into the fuck group all along string Simon along as a puppet , the father is a pion just listening to his dick ! the girlfriend only wants Simon because she can no longer have him ! loved the entire story !

What that dude said.

Why do people need to criticize these stories about what she or he SHOULD have done? It is just a story that I personally find so very entertaining to read over and over, like most of his other ones. I at times wonder why they didn't do something different but then I realized it isn't real and enjoy it for what it is.

Because linnear they think they're the author and can dictate to the man who wrote the story on how he should wrote his own tales.

Why didn’t he have the locks to the house changed. Then all his enemies would just be able to pop up on him...

I disagree with the person that wrote a 'different view' comment. If the writer meant for the sister and mother to be abused; it's not written that way, in my opinion. In one chapter, the mother screams for her brother to pound her cunt. In another chapter, the sister refers to the family orgy as 'their fun'. And finally, the mother and sister are still having sex together. Although the women may have treated as cum buckets; they apparently liked the orgies. That doesn't seem like abuse. Even if it started like that for the mother when she was younger and it doesn't explain how the father got involved if it was abuse on the uncle's and grandfather's part. Again, this is just my opinion on this writing. The writer can write it however he likes.

This is fantastic but I'm too caught up in the story and the drama to actually jerk off... *sigh*

I feel your predicament. That is how you know the writer is truely skilled though. They weave a story so entertaining that while you may have started looking for pleasure, you ended up finding a different kind of satisfaction.

How can he take the high ground now,he has lowered himself to their level?.

I don't usually read in the Incest category so take my comments as an outsider.

Simon had a clear character in chapter 1 - adamantly opposed to incest. In chapter two he does a 180, almost as if he had been hit with the Martian Incest Ray (that's a joke, folks). Suddenly he is dipping his wick into three generations of the family females, including inlaws. I feel fortunate that the author chose not to include boys in his sexual appetite. Sorry to many of the commenters, but I cannot agree that this is an admirable free-for-all plot - it's not even up to the fantasy level. Additionally, there is not a single character in the story who is better than despicable.

After reading all 51 current comments, I am amazed there are no complaints regarding the lack of editing. IMO, this story reads like the author fits in the ESL category. Misspellings, bad word choice, poor grammar, shitty punctuation - all indicate that Soul71 has submitted a rough draft as his final version. While I have not checked, I can't believe this is also true for his pay-per-view works.

So, Soul71, thank you for the effort, but this is just not my cuppa.

love your stories - but you really need to do some editing for spelling and grammar. keep writing.

Sorry to be blunt, but whoever you're using as editors suck; and you really need to download the Grammarly app. It won't stop you from mixing up words such as commendations and accommodations, but it might stop your prose from seeming so fucking labored.

Nice! I like how the story is evolving, gaining momentum.

This is all completely fucked. Why am I still reading?

The sister scene was hot though, and my wife agrees.

We both probably have a bit of a rape fetish too, though mostly me... As a victim.

I see comments on chapter 2 are turned off, good call. Mother is a cock slut and sister is SO in love with Simon that she had to suck her dads cock to get to sleep, oh, while riding her grandfathers cock and taking her uncle up her ass…. LMFAO!!!

I really don't understand Simon's mentality. Did he get brain damage from his injury? Why allow those who caused him so much grief back into his life?

Love the story but sack the editor. In the 2nd chapter simon became Samuel twice and a few spelling mistakes. But this chapter is full of silly errors

Lets read the next chapter before making comments. AAA+++

As messed up as his family is, Simon’s life would be better if he had just told his grandma’s lawyer he would not live anywhere near his incestuous family especially his mother that drugged and raped him, just give it all to charity.

I was hoping for him to get revenge sooner but Simon just seems to enjoy screwing his family. For a decorated solid he is a coward when it comes to his personal life.

The next chapter better be really good. I am sitting on the edge of my seat reading this and I don't want to be disappointed.

Simon was totally in the right to expose his family the way he did,otherwise his family wouldn't pay for their treachery of ruining it themselves,they had to pay the consequences.

With that said bott Amy and Mom learned the most valuable lesson that they hurt their Brother and Son tremendously and will have to spend the rest of their lives making it up to Simon.I just think Amy got so caught up in her incestuous fun that she forgot what was important,namely Simon,and on some level I think Amy hurt Simon the worst as they had been best friends growing up,playing together,protecting eachother,and just a close sibling relationship.

But Amy nearly threw their relationship away.Amy claimed to love Simon deeply but she allowed Melody to worm her way into the family fun,and never divulged the truth to Simon,for that alone Amy deserved Simons retribution.

Now Mom her actions were deplorable and heinous of raping her son,but in her defense she had been abused by her Dad,Brother,and Husband as nothing more than a toy to fuck and play with.So Simon had an easier time forgiving his Mom even tho he was rougher with her after he came back.

But thankfully Simon is slowly letting Amy and Mom make amends.I just hope they realize what is most important and vow to not take Simon for granted.And even tho Amy and Mom seem like total cock-craving sluts I think if given the option of No Dick or Simons Dick they would choose Simons every time.

wow. maybe a bit too realistic? I mean both father and brother were molesting their sister then later the daughter of their sister. That's the kind of sick sh*t you read in the news. Great story though.

The reason Amy gave for participating in the family orgies doesn't make any sense.

After contemplating on this for a while I feel Amy indeed is truly remorseful for hurting Simon and she really does love Simon deeply,but as for the Big Betrayal I think Amy played a small part in that but not the biggest part.That alone fell on Melody and Dad Paul and Simon wanted to make them pay worst.

Amy and Mom may have hurt Simon but they somewhat redeemed themselves by grovelling and complete honesty,and of course offering there whole bodies as payment for their betrayal.

But about Aunt Caroline or whatever her name is remarked that she was the only one who could legally marry Simon,but to stipulate that may be true but with this being fiction Simon could still marry his older sister Amy,and to make it interesting get a Greedy Priest who is a money grubber to Marry Simon and Amy for a couple of grand and they go on their Honeymoon and concieve their child there.That would be EPIC to have Brother and Sister get married.

Oh, gawd.

I am quite familiar with Submarines. I have BEEN aboard Georgia

"USNBS Georgia" CH3, PG2

Holy Horsemanure. The last four letters are correct, but scrambled. No "U"

Originally SSBN 729, converted to SSGN 729.

Having my own "accomodations"...."Well, the president found your address on your release papers, along with your accommodations".

Give me a break. How about "commendations"?

I usually don't complain...as they are, in fact, just stories. But this one? Oh, boy.

Screwed the story up.

Amy should have communicated with his brother instead of becoming a whore. She had a choice and her brother was old enough to make his own decision.

I'm tired of Simon being in the dark. After six years in the military - and reflecting his conversation at the American Legion Post - how can he not be detail-oriented enough to view the CD his grandmother's lawyer gave him? He's smart. He needs to be smarter than everyone is giving him credit for. And it feels like Amy should be helping. If Mother is remorseful (as it appears), she should be spilling the beans, now, too.

I'm seeing continuity errors all over the place.

That was good! (All three chapters.) Thanks.

So Amy was in love with her brother before she was defiled, and instead of helping him and talking to him, whores herself to "protect him". There's always so many weird plot holes in this author's stories. The general jist of the story is fine but there's always those bits that just don't make sense. This is one such hole to me. Only a moron would make that choice and she doesn't seem like a moron. The only thing I kept reading is to see Melody get fucked over for the shit she pulled, especially since the story took a nosedive after the first chapter for me.

Good Story. One tech issue it is SSGN Georgia NOT USSBN Georgia More correctly it is USS Georgia (SSBN-729/SSGN-729). When USS Georgia was a ballistic missile submarine it was SSBN, SS = Submarine, B = Ballistic, N = Nuclear Powered. The USS Georgia was converted to a guided missile sub IE cruse missile (Tomahawk) hence the change to G = Guided.

When is he going to watch the dvd gran left him via the solicitor?

Overall weak series.

Awesome and hot story! Great plot and characters I've grown to love. I especially like Amy's arc, how everything she did was out of love for her brother, and that her and Simon found their way back to one another.

Boy, you can't spell for shit OR you never attended English class. Probably both , take some lessons before you try to "write" again, Poorly written trash,

the author had a bright idea, and then it just went to shit.