All Comments on 'A Family Secret Ch. 02'

I hope that he gets some time alone with his mom so that he can fuck her by himself. Thanks for the good story.......Rich

definetly tell us more..and for women/moms like myself..please...more dad/son bi..with mom as part of it..being their cumslut..nothing a bigger turn-on for us..than that scenerio..whether reading it..or experiencing it..i know...

A 6th grader could write better than this. Example: "She purred in my mouth and grinded her crotch into mine has my dick grew hard against her wet panties. I feel backwards on the bed as she mounted me and took of my shirt". Four mistakes in two sentances is just to much to enjoy a story.

sentances?

And what's he moaning about? Yes! Grammar and structural composition! So anonymous in usa how many mistakes did you make in one sentence? You meant to say 'Four mistakes in two sentences is just too many to be able to enjoy a story.' Perhaps someone could add them up for you?

The story is not bad, but the grammar spoils it,try and get an editor to read your stories before posting them.

Your story is good enough, but your grammar needs a bit more work, maybe English is not your first language.

Keep trying.

My parents are open swingers and there was an open invite for us kids to join them. it was all about age. The open invited started from age 9 but we werent allowed until 18. hahaha no family secret for us. just fun

MORE!!!!!

My cock is really hard from your story please add sister!!

Good job for what it is but I'm straight. Keep writing.

I want to drink my Dad's cum and sperm from my mother's precious lips as I kiss her beautiful face and nether regions.

Your grammar sucks worse than your imaginary mom.

Don't you think that if he went to all the trouble of writing this story, he would at least grammar-check the story too?

I am liking this story, @nd day into edging knowing it is 2 more days before I am allowed to let my watery fluid flow from my sissy clit. 4yourpleasureiam

I still do not know why I enjoy this story. Maybe because everyone in the family is self-aware and confident in their ego.

Ask for help to fix the spelling, grammar, and idiomatic errors that are in every paragraph