by templeton_rose
although not into 'pantyhose'..never the less...your dad/son bi action on pages
#5-6..was sex charged...hope you continue to tell us more..with mom joining her studs for watching and being in the action between dad/son...
Wow, its not often that I can say this but your story was damn near perfect. Thank you for taking the time to make sure that the story flowed as well as it did while letting it remain as hot as it did.
I have never been a huge fan of the nylon fetish (not against it mind you, just not my thing) but you made it work for me.
Hope you keep up the good work!
Awesome story! Lots of hot steamy fun, with some love thrown in. You have a real knack for dialogue. The dirty talking was incredible! 5 stars, for sure.
It was great that you took some time to develop the characters. A bit too much time on pantyhose, though.
loved how it was just hurry come, you took time to develop the characters and that madeit all the more interesting, hot and sexy
Good read. There were a handful grammar issues but nothing over the top. Except, "Since we're all having incest now..." That one made me stop. The rape talk and choking wasn't my thing but it was a small enough part of the story that I didn't mind too much. I think this might have benefited from multiple chapters. It just felt a little rushed. Overall though, I like it. Good Job.
It baffles me why some writers feel the need to introduce fetishes - in this case pantyhose - into stories about incest.
To true aficionados of the genre, especially those like myself who are fortunate enough to actually practice incest, (my mother and myself have been fucking since long before my father passed away over 10 years ago) rather than merely fantasising about it, incest and the excitement of its forbidden aspect IS our fetish.
We need no other.
needs more chapters, how business progress, children, other relationships for Chad and Jessica.possible expansion of the family.
Now that is what I call a Christmas story. I do hope there is a sequel to this Great holiday tale.
Please write more. Really like the story idea. Can't wait to read more like this.
While the pantyhose fetish was overdone and the gay male sex is always a bit nauseating for me, The incest between the rest of the characters was quite hot. I guess I'm just too straight for man on man sex. They say that all men have thought about gay sex at some point in the lives. Never me, thank you very much. Women are far too soft and their breasts are far too delicious. Then there's the other stuff. LOL
Great story. Well written. I want you to win the contest. Keeping my fingers crossed!
I liked the blend of emotional needs as the basis for sexual joining, fetish shame turned to supportive love, surprise discoveries of sex acts leading to more sex, incestuous sex in nearly every direction (will aunts, uncles and cousins be next in the mix?), surveillance providing motivation for more sex, and on and on. Each of the aspects could have been neglected or developed more, changing the character of the whole story. Instead the author wisely kept the balance to make a great story.
This story shows that the author has the skill to branch out in practically any direction. I look forward to more great reads.
The biggest problem, per se', I see with this story would be classifying it. The overall "feel" to it is Incest. However, there are also elements of fetism, pantyhose, and some Non-Consent involved, also. Either way, being a major pantyhose fan, I enjoyed, pretty much all of it! So, how about, at least, a sequel, and maybe, a series?!
This story so entrapped the imagination,that I found myself climaxing along with the characters at least three times.
For me there are a string of personal negatives about this story :-
- I am not turned on by panty hose and lack sufficient imagination to understand why anyone would be.
- Gay sex (of either gender) really does nothing for me although, in this case, I can see what other might see in it.
- I find rough / forced sex a real turn off.
With all of these personal negatives you would have thought this story was not for me but the quality of the way it was written more than compensated for the downsides. Luckily the forced / rough sex was limited and not a major part of the story. I particularly liked the emotional needs and subsequent bonds created within the family. This was handled very well. I reserve 5*'s for stories where both the writing quality and the subject matter are to my taste but this is certainly well worth the 4*'s I gave it.
Well written and developed. You hit my hot buttons - men in pantyhose, mom & son, and right to the point. Good job. Keep 'em coming.
I would love to read more!!! It was a bloody brilliant read and I really enjoyed it (up until the make on male part, but I just skipped it like any straight man would).
It was brilliantly written with little grammar and spelling issues here and there (which is normal for something that hasn't been seen by an editor. The best of us do it).
Overall, it needs a sequal! I was never really into the whole incest idea until reading this. It just made it so much more exciting and sexy! I love pantyhose! (Where I come from we just call them stockings or tights).
I really enjoyed the whole father on daughter part too, even though it only had a very small part in the grand scheme of the story. I have a huge daddy kink so it really turned me on reading that bit!
It's a great story and definitely deserves a sequal!
The stockings were "hung" with incestuous care, all in the hopes the mother-fuckers would be there. They donned their gay apparel , all clad in silken pantyhose to enjoy a Christmas carol. The mother was sodden , her pussy so wet, on account of her family's interest in the fetishes you can bet. Mom insisted that all take care, as mommy's pussy was delicious beyond compare. The daddy all clad in his pantyhose with utmost care, all in the hopes the family would ensnare. The weather cold, the stockings provide a lust, but the heat from within providing in the sheer pantyhose they did trust.Happy holidays.
Three words: HOT HOT HOT! My wife and I both love wearing hose together, the thought of having a full-blown bisexual pantyhose incest orgy with our 5 children is a huge fantasy for us now.
9/10, rounds up to 5/5
The mm action is totally no sale, but I was in a forgiving mood.
That Jess was okay with being raped made her and the author seem insane, but her reconciliation with Chad, and her eagerness to continue having sex with Chad ...
Yup! Fucking insane -- and gratuitously so, in the cases of ff and mm action. On the other hand, the absurdly warped tale is relatively well written.
So many of my fetishes rolled into one beautiful, crazy tale. I’ve had this favorite for ages, but after my umpteenth time getting excited over it I thought I’d leave a comment and that you for your work. I’ve always wanted a follow-up, especially to see how little obedient, submissive Jess is doing as a young pregnant woman or mommy.
Found this to be a unique incestuous love story. So many fetishes. An unfilfulled fetish can be the fuel that drives one to be successful, if nothing else, to be successful enough to be able to filfull the fetish. As this story details, how much emotional and/or mental damage can be self-inflicted when living with an unmet fetish. Thankfully, this family was able to realize their respective fetishes. What is scary is when the fetish is obtained and person realizes it is not what he expected or hoped it would be. Although 9 years old, I would have liked the author to continue with a sequeal. I would like to see the submissive mother and daughter reconstruct their male counterparts. The only problem I have with this story was the male on male. No problem with the ladies but male with male I simply can not tolerate. This is the only reason I rated this story 4 stars instead of 5.