All Comments on 'A Family's Descent Ch. 02'

You need to go back and read this. Where you should have been referring to Cassie, you were calling her Chelsea (and vice-versa). So, if possible, go back and fix this so that it has the proper continuity.

Early in writing, I became acutely aware of some issues like you describe and took great care to ensure I didn't confuse the two girls. I did review again after your comment and didn't see any issues, though.

I did see though I left an italics tag unclosed. Blech.

So fucking hot, I had to stop myself from cumming too soon! My wet little pussy can't wait for Part 2!!

Thank you. I try and sometimes succeed! Did you read the first chapter?

women are bisexual, although they might need a nudge (albeit not much of one) to realize it and then are happy to share their man with their new female lovers.

I liked the touch of having Chelsea (the daughter's friend) start calling her friend's father "Daddy."

Oh to be a 'daddy' in a situation like that! Whew, that would be HOT!

Your engagement has been gratifying!