All Comments on 'A Family's Tale Ch. 01'

keep it coming,more excellent.

this is a great start to a series.. i cant wait to see what happens next

Very good starting. I liked the idea of the secret affair between Derek and Mom. Keep the affair secret to father. I like incest and cheating wives's story.

Please, soon the continuation!!!

Wow, Eric isn't the only one envious of his brother. Keep 'em coming, please.

It is very interesting to see the relationship between Derek and his mom, although I'm way more interested in seeing what happens between Eric and his mom and to see how all of their relationships are affected.

Excellent story of mother-son fun. Your descriptions were detailed and vivid. Way to write.

AwfulLy satisfying,goOd dEtail,great story, makes you wanNa keEp reading, love the secretive sexual tension, KEEP IT COMMING PLEASE! xD