All Comments on 'A Family's Tale Ch. 02'

by Omegabh2o

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Good stuff

Double-teaming Emma is a must. If that works out well, a surprise might work-The dad gets back early and all three fuck Emma senseless

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Really Good!

Great story! How about an Emma sandwich between her sons, with Eric getting to take her ass!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Hmm!!

Time now for Mom to dump Derek's ass, after all he was only the "Subsitute" for Eric.....He's way to damned cocky.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
A Family's Tale Ch. 03

Dear Ms. Omegabh2o,

Your writing is very good. This story needs many more chapters. Emma and Erin need to love many times in many ways. Like the shower, the hot tube, she needs to ride him all night.

Please write more of this great series!

Thank you for your great work!

Bill

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
MORE

more of eric and emma. eric also needs to get with his gorgeous teacher, i mean, green eyes and red hair and a killer smile. he's gotta try to seduce her.

steve8576steve8576almost 19 years ago
Fantastic!!!

This is a fantastic story! PLEASE continue to write further chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great

give us more it been 6 month give us part 3

come on .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Eric's fun with mom

A shear delight. Your detail was very good. Having both son's shoot deep was great. Keep the good times cumming.

JohnSpiritWolfJohnSpiritWolfabout 16 years ago
THAT WAS THE HOTTEST!!!!!

Damn buddy... You write so well, much better than most on here... I hope that you keep it up... That was sheer genius... The way you wrote it... The way you portrayed the characters... Everytthing about the story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Best iv ever read, a true masterpiece!!!

that was amazing, ur characters, plot and sex were great and had soo much detail. plz keep this story going, its too good not to!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
lucky mom opens her cunt to both her boys' huge dicks

This is a brilliant story by an author still in his 20s, whose young balls are stimulated to the max by the best fucking there is--motherfucking! In the story, Emma, the mother goes wild when she sees the heavy-duty dicks jumping around in her sons' pants. Cocky self-assured Derek doesn't waste a minute getting his huge prick up where it belongs, his own mother's tight wet twat. No hesitation, no ridiculous "guilt," like any normal healthy boy he wants to unload his big balls up his own birth canal, his mother's mommy-cunt, and he does! Derek isn't selfish, though. He knows is mother's slit'll be open to him any time he wants. Now he arranges for his brother Eric to share mom's gash with him. Eric's prick is as massive as his brother's, and soon he's shoving it up where Derek's just shot his sperm. What a lucky lady Emma is--two teenage sons with incredibly big dicks swinging between their legs and with balls that just never quit! The boys have plenty of warm semen sloshing around in those heavy sacks of theirs, and it's all for their mommy's hot cunt! The old truth, "A mother's twat is her son's playground" goes double for this family, as Derek and Eric happily share their "playground," as good motherfucker brothers should! Mom's cunt is going to be son-sperm-logged from now on!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
awesome

My favorite story so far you're very talented. 5 stars

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