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by HadesHand

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Strange yes, sexy no.

Poorly conceived and badly told. Get an editor. Then get a better story line.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Well

I'll read the next chapter!

abingtonabingtonalmost 9 years ago
Good start

You have made a good start with your story. Do not be discouraged ! Keep on writing, and let us see where you take us. have a nice day.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
i liked it

cant wait for the next chapter xxx nicely detailed and started

1789317893almost 9 years ago
very soon!

How long is very soon? =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I like the storyline

I liked the writing style and I'm looking forward to more chapters! :)

littlebittyjetlittlebittyjetover 8 years ago
Great intro

You're off to a great start! Now on to the next chapter...

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