All Comments on 'A Fantasy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I'll be the first to comment

I have no respect for a man who wants other men to fuck his wife. You are all little drippy dicked scum. When I look at the economic trouble in the world andall the turmoil I think of the reason. One of them is little widdle dicked creep cuckolds like you ..(the ones that writ this shit).If I were face to face with you I would bea...no..I wouldn't dirty my hands on you or your slut women...marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I would start...

separating assets and take your name off of her credit cards...and not sign a long term lease on the apartment... This relationship is toast...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
A Fantasy about getting your wife gangbanged

And by Black men no less. Stupid fantasy. Stupid story. Don't worry though the cucks and wimps wil love this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
ignore the haters, but work on grammar

There are a bunch a jerks on this site who have nothing better to do than spew hatred. Ignored them. However, if you want people to enjoy your stories, PLEASE run spelling and grammar checks, and proof-read your story. Your story was *almost* unreadable due to all the errors.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
it seems a little rough on first timers

The man in the story must be proud of his wife, and proud that she is very sexy.He must have the mind set of: (If she fucks other men and still wants me then she must think I am worthy of her. The thought of her poor little body being used and abused by big mean men,and now he has to sooth her battered body, and tell her that he still loves her and forgives her for being unfaithful.)I think that would work a couple of times, but what happens when it's every weekend, how is he going to feel,especially when she starts to comment on how little his cock is. That's the life of a cuckold, isn't it?.....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Almost unreadable?

This was as bad as anything I've ever read on this site. The writing was horrible, there was nothing believable about the setup, and it was generally, well, shit.

don87654don87654over 15 years ago
Barebacked and Diseased?

A great barebacked fucking, but obviously your fantasy did not allow for possible STDs when you fucked her cum-filled pussy, not knowing what kind of cocks had shot into her, and obviously you did not take that into account as you later showed her pregnancy.Maybe a follow-up will explain whether or not her baby was half-black, half-greaser, half-gook, or what.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Agree with majority

Have no respect for wimps who think it's wonderful to pimp out their wives. Try another occupation that doesn't require that you be a pimp for your wife.

the Ct. Yankee

janice kjanice kover 15 years ago
Black Baby Thoughts

Obviously this is one story that definitely needs a another part. You just can't leave it like this and I would love to find out that she has a black baby. Maybe then she would remember what happened, that is if she doesn't already know and just trying to play the "I don't remember what happened game"...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I can only assume.......

that English is not your first language. If you decide to write another story, please get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Try again

I'm not into this type of story, but beside that you need a good editor to correct the choppy style of writing. Try again, practice makes perfect. Good luck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
well at least

somebody who says it's a fantasy and that he doesn't know if he ever wants to see it. well dear writer: first you never know if it not allready happend if your wife has regular girls night out, so don't be to sure about yourself. women tend to cheat a lot more than man think. second, eventhough a fantasy , this woman described would have known a lot more, because of the bruises and the missing panties (they never forget their best panties), so if that is your fantasy it's strange. you don't want to have at least an honest wife? third, I won't talk about STD's because its a fantasy but somehow I think you still should get help somewhere because getting a sick sex kick on the back of a kid (not born yet but has to live with the consequenses of their shitty-parents) is nothing to make a joke about. that's truly perverted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Not worth reading

Only a sick minded and deranged husband could think like that and it would serve him right if she had a black baby.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
SICK

I would have told the gang-bang whore slut out the door--she should have known better--she went to get fucked. As for you ---you are one sick puppy

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Well the husband is really an asshole!

the wife is either the company punchboard or she was raped either way he is to stupid to know or care. Any company that has female employees attend such a function without their spouse in attendence is saying very clearly our lower lever female staff are for the pleasure of our clients and upper management. In onther words she is a whore. To find your wife in such a state out on the street implies she was drunk, raped, and then put in the street to throw the company off from blame. Tis time for a lawsuit against the company for sexual harassment and allowing such actions to occur. Since it was a company function and she attended the allowing first of her to get drunk, then the sexual acts that followed are in some way the responsibility of the company. To touch her sexually, even to kiss her at this stage would be stupid. There is no way of knowing what diseases she has been exposed to and it will take months of testing to determine if she is infected with some of them like HIV/AIDS. This story belongs in a horror section due to what is happening to both of their lives for the next year.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hard To Comprehend writer Embarrassing Self

Pain & weakness exciting someone is hard to put in perspective for a normal person as even a child seeks to avoid negatives.<P>

Instead we have a weak self cuck excited about raising a black bastard baby - a white one would be OK but a black gets his cock hard. What??? His wifely Renta Whore is with something not his and the writer is so excited he can't write straight.<P>

You really need help bunkie in the attempt to respect yourself so others may.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Opportunity missed

Hubby could have eaten her creampie as his reward for waiting patiently at home. YUMMY!!

Tearsofsorrow2Tearsofsorrow2over 15 years ago
I am hopeful

that your wife got a life threatening STD. You deserve AIDS. I can't help but wonder what your father did wrong to raise such a useless piece of shit like you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I guess you know that a company that throws a big

party and excludes the spouses is opening it's self for a lot of lawsuits for alienation of affection and sexual harrassment. The husband in your story is a wimp cuckold but not me and a lot of other husbands. If this story were real i would try and get all the husbands together to sue the companies ass off. Shame on you you pathetic creature...marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Keep Writting

The story is a fantasy, and of course the fantasy of the writer. Don't worry about what others think. They likely have no fantasy or if they have any cuckold fantasies they are ashamed and likely feel guilty because they think they are lesser men. The bottom line cuckoldry comes in many forms and shapes, and as long as the husband and the wife or the couple are OK with it, then it is nobody else issue.

So, if the husband had those fantasies and he was finally able to fulfill them, then good for him! Keep dreaming, and keep writting! Thanks for the story!

shywifeshywifeabout 15 years ago
Great realistic fantasy

Nice job! You did a good job writing about a very real fantasy that many of us share. The element of really not knowing exactly what happened to your unfortunate wife, adds to the drama. The whole concept of a prim and proper wife making maybe a careless decision and ending up being taken advantage of is appealing. I would like to see more writing done on this very subject. It's a great fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

That was great, i love sleeping wife stories! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Awesome, I have fucked my wife for real after she was dropped back home by taxi from her works do 5 hours late, and covered in cum

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
nice fantasy man

I like the fact that you didnt know what happened ... and you never told her

I can just imagine what it'd feel like to slide urself into ur wife while she is dripping with a strangers cum.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

wow, somethings are better left for your imagination

sinsational83sinsational83over 8 years ago
MAN

I'm sure glad you didn't write any more shit like this. It sure shows what a real piece of shit husband you are.

horny_gurl55horny_gurl55about 8 years ago
total sick

this is just a total sick piece of garbage shit, who the hell would fuck their own wife in such condition and also not tell her about the night before affairs she must have been involved into

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
My fiancé

My fiancé and I went out one night she was wearing a short white skirt it was thin so almost see through with light on it you could see clearly she was wearing a white thong and was wearing a black silk strap top no bra tot are big and perky 36e big bum she is size 14 beautiful face well we was in a pub meet a few people he we started talking to then they asked if we was going to soko (clubbing) we again half cut already we was dancing in a group I went to the toilet when I came back she was being groped I sat back and watched for a minute then went over and she was leaning on me drunk almost passing out so went outside had a smoke a guy came out said they where leaving to go to a friends house would we like to go I thought I need some more to drink and agreed got there and there was 7 guys 8 including me I put Chloe on the sofa we all went outside to smoke I could see her through a window two guys said they need toilet and one asked if I wanted a drink so I said yes and they brought out shots all out having a laugh I look over at Chloe and see the two guys are playing with Chloe rubbing her tits and one was eating her pussy so I made out I needed the toilet one guy ran in said me first to warn them I was coming got to living room they pretend to be watching tv so I went to the toilet went back out side and slowly pretended to fall asleep facing the window watching them play with my fiancé after a few minutes the rest of them went in and all started getting naked but left Chloe fully clothed and started fucking her at this point I was wanking freely as they couldn't see out as was dark but I could see in after about 2 hours they all had finished I pretended to wake up went over to Chloe they all had fallen asleep she was covered in cum her clothes face her and pussy and ass she was still passed out phoned a taxi half way home I realised I have no cash and he says can he fuck her so I said yes and he pulled up at a holiday in went round the back and it was a taxi hang out and they took turns on her there must of been 10 taxi men all pakis and when they finished our taxi guy made me lick her pussy and spit the cum on her clothes then we had to walk the rest of the way but I had to carry Chloe half way I had to stop and a guy drove passed offered a lift which I kindly accepted and when we got home I asked him in to fuck her so he did and when he left I was licking Chloe all over then fucked her was best sex ever she struggled to walk for a few days and was not happy when I told her but I didn't tell her from when we left the house she would kill me lol

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Simply pathetic

This probably the saddest attempt at writing a story that I have ever seen. It is pathetic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I thought this story was pretty good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

'some many years now'

some or many, not both.

'though of this story'

thought.

'And its still'

it's.

'unknowingly'

unknowingly.

'just my fantasies and I have never had the courage to tell my lovely wife about it'

about them.

All that before it starts. God knows what the original was like.

coolstrangeravenuecoolstrangeravenue3 months ago

screw the haters who criticize, great story

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

What gutless turd gets turned on after finding his wife, most likely raped, and sitting outside a convenience store at 3AM? His wife could possibly have an STD, internal bleeding, alcohol poisoning, and possibly date rape drugs in her system. What does hubby do? Gets a hard on stripping down his wife.i get it's fantasy. What i don't get is how finding someone you're supposed to love, honor, and cherish in such a state, and getting off on it.

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