All Comments on 'A Fantasy Fulfilled'

Thank you.

That was really awesome!

Oh my!!!

that was some fucking hot fucking! I was a little disappointed that they didn't dp her, but the ending of the story gives me hope for a part 2!

Oh, that was yummy!

Happens to be 1 of my fantasies too!

Very well written & not too long winded either.

Ummmm....next?

That made me hot hot hot!!! Great story!

I want to meet those brothers! ;-)

Incredibly good writing...one of the best I've read in a long while. The detail at the start was very well done - I could see their interaction, and unlike many stories, it drew me in and set the scene rather than being something to skip. Very well done.

Very well written. Good erotica. The female perspective was nice as well done. One of the better stories I've read. Hoping there's a sequel but this story makes me want to read more of your work. You definitely deserve the accolades you have received.

The possibility of her getting pregnant from one of the two brothers..but not knowing which one?

Very well written - great pacing and nice detail - I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

Engaging story very well written, perfect pace, not too fast, not too slow. Really good descriptions, felt like I was in the room! (i wish)

The only problem now is whether Ryan will expect to be 'cheered up' by Colleen on a regular basis, and if so, whether Kevin will start to get jealous of his older, better-endowed brother. Quite a conundrum.

. . . from one of Literotica's finest authors. The characters were interesting and well-drawn, the plot was excellent, and the sex was hot, hot, hot! Just what I've come to expect from Angel.

That was one of the most well-written stories I have read online in a very long time. Pacing was great, it was very hot and all the characters seemed believable. Colleen reacted like a normal woman might, not a porn movie stereotype.

Brilliant. Brilliant. Brilliant.

I am all wet and horny now, I do hope that you will continue writing more of this.

Great. This has to go on for more chaptere. Please?

I know everyone's taste is different, but for me, I like stories that have at least one admirable character. That was a little hard to find in this story. Kevin is a jerk. He got his girlfriend drunk and took advantage of that so he could watch his brother fuck her. What hope is there ever going to be of a solid future relationship with Colleen.

Ryan was more than willing to fuck his brother's girlfriend. Of course, Kevin was urging it, but nevertheless, we guys don't have to let our little head control us do we?

Colleen was somewhat taken advantage of. If Kevin had given her a date rape drug, we'd have thought he was terrible, but plying someone with alcohol comes mighty close, in my opinion. Of course, Colleen had allowed Kevin to show her off to Ryan many times before the final, admittedly very sexy scene.

I agree that Kevin is a bit of a jerk, I would like the story to continue, but with her getting more involved with Ryan

I'm a girl and I don't think Kevin did anything wrong. She was open to it previously, and the story doesn't have her being out of control drunk.

its a fantasy story (no need to get mad!)

its short funky and sexy! Kevin isn't a jerk, she agreed to it too, it turned her on. And everybody was happy!

Intense as primal. Nicely written.

hot as fuck.

You will clearly need to follow this start with a proper finish. I need the boyfriend in her ass while she is riding the brother. I mean what a girl wants... is of course is to let her boyfriend feel his older brother's larger cock tickling her cervix, not for her pleasure, I mean that would make her a naughty girl. Just doing it for their satisfaction, the selfless act of love, I always say.

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I agree with the last comment. My gf did DP with me and my brother. It's the perfect ending.

I too was waiting for the DP....now that would have got it a 5th star

Uhh. *drool* I can't even... That was really good. One of my fav's for sure. I must agree with a previous comment that the initial interaction drew me in right away to a part I might usually skim through. And Kevin, I thought he was great, I didn't think he was a jerk at all. Uhh, I'd do him. Thanks for sharing your talent!

That was incredible!

damnnnnnn that left me hot,wet and horny. I need to get laid really bad

This had me so hot I actually ache to be filled!

Wow! Hot!

WOW! Just wishing that I was the woman in this story!

Oh. WOW.

Wow...need to continue with many DPs

Kevin seems like a LOSER

This made me so hard, it hurt!