by LoneCoyote
Arousing tale, and well written. Thanks for sharing it.
Great job.
Keep writing.
Just double check the spelling/ grammer as there were a few issues.
A tidy little tale full of naughtiness. Thanks.
By the way, Winzip - grammAr !
Well written, just enough build up, always humorous and realistic enough. What more could we ask for - except more and perhaps longer stories?
i really enjoyed the Authors latest story .
and i very much enjoyed this one as well.
short & sweet , a little tease like in nature ,
one could compare the stories to a flash of knickers/panties or a flirtatious smile.
grabs your attention , leaves you wanting more , and wishing it lasted longer.