All Comments on 'A Fantasy Job'

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swingerjoeswingerjoealmost 10 years ago
An excellent tale

Arousing tale, and well written. Thanks for sharing it.

Winzip042109Winzip042109almost 10 years ago
Nicely written.

Great job.

Keep writing.

Just double check the spelling/ grammer as there were a few issues.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Neat

A tidy little tale full of naughtiness. Thanks.

By the way, Winzip - grammAr !

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fun and fun!

Well written, just enough build up, always humorous and realistic enough. What more could we ask for - except more and perhaps longer stories?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Delightful

i really enjoyed the Authors latest story .

and i very much enjoyed this one as well.

short & sweet , a little tease like in nature ,

one could compare the stories to a flash of knickers/panties or a flirtatious smile.

grabs your attention , leaves you wanting more , and wishing it lasted longer.

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