All Comments on 'A Fateful Bargain'

I've read both submissions and not being aroused by lesbian erotica I feel that this is a well written, well thought out series. I can feel the emotion you're experiencing. I would like for you to continue as you have indicated you're going to do anyway.

...but after Lizzie confessed, I just want Jac to say "No, either you or nothing". All or nothing at all.