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Click hereOh, how wrong I was!
I under-estimated my darling Laura-Jane. Should have realized that every part of our marriage and our lives together was part of her plan. That no part of our lives had been unused if it could help to bring about the scenario that she desired.
The thought reminds me that I have to so much work to do in the morning. Talks with the lawyers to close the company that I quit what seems like a lifetime ago. Work upon the new master bedroom that will hold my family, the maids and the without fail beautiful, unmarried women with whom ElJay had staffed my company. The women who form what ElJay calls her coven, and with whom she tried to tempt me. And after that? I still need to work upon the much smaller, more conventional bedrooms within which our children will sleep, ignorant of the licentious and incestuous relationship that their collective mothers and fathers will have with each other.
Why is it that ElJay would want so many children? Why is it that she would dedicate our lives to continuing not just my bloodline but our son's as well? Why is it that she hopes that our children and grandchildren will continue our incestuous lust? What did she mean when she had stated that eventually, perhaps long after our time, one of the women would give birth to a girl who was more angel than human? So many questions whose answers I either couldn't understand, or she wouldn't give.
But what does it matter when I have the three who lie before me? For what reason should I be anything but happy that both I and the three whom I worship will soon sleep with not just each other, but 11 other women as well? No, I have too much work to do in the morning; and I'll need every bit of energy that I can muster for what will take place once the women have arrived and the morning is over. I lie down before my peacefully sleeping wife, and though I mean to kiss her goodnight once more, I fall asleep before I can do so, happy in the knowledge that I will have a lifetime to make up for that one missed opportunity.
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To anyone who has managed to make it this far - I congratulate and thank you for your persistence! I hope that you have enjoyed this, my first submitted story, and would appreciate any constructive criticism that you might have.
Ysoi. m(_ _)m
- COMMENTS
ToughSailor7 months agoFairly decent story line. Noticed the British use of such words as : Randy, whilst, etc., would indicate that the writer is from the UK.
Anonymousover 5 years agoHaving read many hundreds of Literotica stories, I find this to be written in an amazingly unique voice. The characters were so well developed that I was able to imagine/insert many of the missing moments. (LJ pulling aside her son and daughter when he turns 18, giving him his first passionate lover's kiss and then telling them that as adults they are going to have a decision to make. "Are you so sick of your parents that you are compelled to leave us, or do you still love us enough to stay? Please think deeply about this and in a few months when your average age is eighteen I will consider you both adults (since girls do mature at a younger age than boys) and I will expect your answer." Thus begins the gradual escalation of kisses. By the time the kids' total ages reaches 36 and she explains some of her plan to awaken their socially deficient father they are totally onboard, and the sexual escalation begins.)
Although I personally have no interest in the gay male genre I found this to be a very loving, well written and compelling rendition of male bisexuality.
I regret that you didn't feel the need/inspiration for a second chapter, but thanks for this great read.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI can see possibilities, but this was kind of confusing. Far more explanation of LJ is sorely needed.
JimC
Anonymousover 8 years agoRead it all and liked it. Well written good imagination including most of what I like.
However the end disappointed me some.
1) Why crowding with so many people? They had created a nice union, this would make it a three ring circus.
2) why so many potentially problematic incest children. Accidental birth is already a problem. A couple in my family could prove that.
3) wish you had been more descriptive of father son sex once they are okay with it.
I.e. Son fucking dad, sucking etc.
Give it 5*
DYNO224about 9 years agoI think all round you did an excellent job with this story.While normally this is not the type of story I read you did all right.Pro Ball Player wrote a story for this site called A Mothers Promise it is a long story but masterfully written.How ever he never finished it,I would very much like someone of great skill talent and imagination finish it for him as I fear he has passed beyond the veil.If he is no longer with it's a sad thing because his talent and imagination are possibly the best I have come across.I put this out there for you wondering if you or someone you know is up to the task.The story has some of the same components scheming mother perverts son convincing him and herself the perversions she leads him into with sex is what he is really like.That's my read on it anyway.
