All Comments on 'A Feel For The Ice Ch. 01'

Love the hockey stories have made me really interested in meeting my own hockey player lol

I'm TOTALLY addicted to your stories and as a rabid Red Wings and Griffins (their AHL team), I'm going to need rehab from your stories after this one. I'm barely hanging on for chapter 2 and any other chapters after that. I actually know the man who is your Derek Hart and the little antic of him calling from a pay phone is DEFINITELY him!!! Great job and I can't wait to see where the story of Anna, Hayden and Riley is going to go next!!!

Love it! Thanks, Mugs for doing a Wings story for me! :) I love the way you've done this story so far. I know it's painful for you to write a Red Wings "Ice" story, but you're doing a great job so far. I love the interaction between the fans and the players and I love Hayden and Anna. Of course, I might be a bit biased, but I think this is your best "Ice" story so far! LOL GO WINGS!

I'm loving this story! It has to be your best one to date.

say it ain't so! The Great One, MugsyB, is writing about a winger?!? Be still my heart! LoL!! Great work, despite the player choice. I like this storyline very much as it's more mature I think, with the child involved so they're not as free to romp around the sheets. Well, great work! Can't wait to read more!

Z is one of the sexiest players in the NHL - so glad he gets a story! Who wants to read about those baby Pens anyway :p

Way to go, Mugsy. :) I'm anxious for the rest (yes, I know what happens, but still...). Great job.

Fantastic! Simply put I can't wait to read more.

love these stories they have heart and humour and i cannot wait for the next chapters

for the whole last page. It was so good! Can't wait for more!!!! Thanks for posting! Happy Holidays!

As a female and a direhard hockey fan, I'm loving your whole series about hockey players -- it's like a fantasy come true reading these stories =)

Despite being a Pens fan, a lot more than say a Redwings fans, this story is amazing... Your choice of muse for a hockey stud is right on, ( HZ is pretty dreamy, and I love a hockey player with a good beard, hehe.) I'm loving the slow build up and the chemistry you've got going here. That scene is his car was just... wow. I think that made my week.

Hoping feverishly for more updates soon> Keep up the great stories, I think there are plenty of us who are always in the mood or more hockey and more lovin ;)

Thanks and Happy Holidays!

I have an inkling how hard it was to write about the Wings, but this story was amazing! I just kept imagining it was my favorite player instead! LOL Thank you soooo much for writing another Ice story!

you better have Chapter 2 done SOON! Another awesome story. can't wait to read more!!

I can't hold it against you for writing about a Wing, because no matter who you chooe, the story is always wonderful!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Great story so far, and it's made better by the fact that it's about the Wings!!

This is the first one of your stories I've read, and I now have another favorite author. I'm looking forward to catching up........

I don't know if I will continue to read this one. A story making the Red Wings look good? And they beat my Avalanche? Might be too hard to take. If I believed in using emoticons I'd insert the one that looks like a face sticking out its tongue here.

My dear friend, you has great and amazing sense of humor and exceptional talent of writing stories.

The intensity of your work is too awesome and the way you poured it in characters make me proud to read you story.

I like the way you connected innocence of child, loneliness of single mother and a dignified sportsperson on same line.

For me it is amazing read and I wish you keep writing and we keep reading.

All the very best for future stories.

11. A Feel For The Ice (HZ and Anna):

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-feel-for-the-ice-ch-02

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-feel-for-the-ice-ch-02

Being a life-long hockey fan made this story even more special butit is so well-written that anyone could appreciate this unlikely,building romance.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

A BIG 5+ for this gem!

I was so long ago many of us have felt those feelings and the author brings all that romance out with her good writing.

This is a very good start to what could be a very good story. I had to laugh, on page one, when Anna thought about how she and Kevin decided to ‘just be friends’. Right. But the truth is that guys never really get any say in “that” decision, it’s always the woman’s call. A single (straight) guy is always open to a relationship with a nice looking woman. It’s just funny to me that Anna believed that Kevin wasn’t interested in her, when more likely, she shut him down before he got the chance to do anything about it. Still a good story though, I’m looking forward to the next chapter.