All Comments on 'A Few Minor Adjustments Ch. 04'

by Professor_XXX

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good story

I like the development of the story and the bit of uncertainity is a nice "flavoring". Please keep posting the chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great start!

Please continue your episodes of this story. You are opening some great story lines as you go.

peterg55peterg55over 12 years ago
good job

Please continue this series, I love the way it is developing, with subtle, non malicious changes the recipient's behaviour, this is becoming a very good story

Timtom12Timtom12over 12 years ago
Please, Sir, Can I have some more?

PLEASE!! Your adoring public wants more!

Xplorer2000Xplorer2000almost 11 years ago
Very nice

It makes me want to learn hypnosis and use it on my sister-in-law.

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