All Comments on 'A First of Many'

I liked your story. while it was kinda short, it was well done over all. Personally, I can't wait to see another chapter to it if you're planing to make one.

A good storyline! Left it a little short though. Hopefully it will be continued.

good 1st story please add another with sucking and more

loved the story.i wish it was longer though.please add more chapters i wouldlouve to read them.