All Comments on 'A First Step'

Your story is good, but full of silly errors. Either proof read it or get an editor.

"I softly ran my fingers over the taught head "

What was it taught? Clearly not spelling. The word you want is "taut".

I enjoyed you story very much. I hope to read more soon. Thanjs for sharing with us.

Seemed realistic that they all wanted what was going to happen, but were reluctant to let that be known until the booze and the game kicked in.

I totally love the eroticism, and the cliffhanger at the end that her bum needs some attention.

Phew. Very nice.

Skillfully written, the sexual heat builds steadily. Love your style, very satisfying. Looking forward to the next chapter and full swapping.

Wow. Your couples story hits close to home. It's something my Mrs. and I fantasize about together. This story gives us some ideas to ponder together (which always leads to something as we ponder he he).

Mm, thank you Erica. That was exactly what I needed tonight!

This story moved along nicely. Quite realistic

Way too long. One page would have done the trick.

Well written, nicely paced, kept my rapt attention. Brava!