All Comments on 'A First Time for Everything Ch. 01'

by curious_cait

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tellstory2jaketellstory2jakealmost 10 years ago
Nice start

Nothing wrong with slow. Set the stage first.

sopharoonessopharoonesabout 10 years ago
warning

there should be some warning saying that this is the first chapter or whatever coz yeh that was weird. potential!

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 10 years ago
Started out good

Started out good, but then just dropped off.

I hate tease stories, but this didn't even make it to that stage, just a real DUD!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Boooooo.....no erotic ness lol xD

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