All Comments on 'A First Time for Everything Ch. 04'

by curious_cait

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JWrenJWrenalmost 10 years ago
Building tension

Nice blow job description with mix of virginal uncertainty and apprehension adding to the tension. So far, the build-up has been steady and their coupling should not rush to a conclusion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Building tension 2

Heartily agree with JWren's comment. Looking forward to the next chapter.

DonatienDonatienalmost 10 years ago
Superb writing

Just like the first three installments in this suite, this episode is admirably written. The rhythm is sustained, the dialog is lively and the description of the erotic action is imaginative, detailed and torrid. I look forward to the next episode.

CanadianMCanadianMover 9 years ago

Totally enjoyed it... your description of the sex was great, including her emotions and feelings as she explored new boundaries... Well done... can't wait for your next one.

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