All Comments on 'A Fishing Trip, But I'm The Bait Ch. 05'

Ooh que j'adore

tes métaphores

it's always beautiful when sex and love come together

Bravo ☺

Somehow I read the first few installments and have missed these last ones, but I adore this one, sweetheart. So very lovely.

What wonderful, delicious, absolutely delightful lovemaking! Excellent and evocative writing! I am soooo hard reading this beautiful stuff! 💋

Few writers can pull off such a long scene of sexual intimacy. Usually when I read attempts like this, it's more of a quick scan until the story picks up again. This one kept me interested and entertained from start to finish! Just really loving the believable emotions of a young trans girl figuring out her new life!

Lovely.

I was once with a man who made me feel so ike that. Your wonderful description brought it all back. Beautiful! Xx

Jane's transformation is moving and beautiful, such a lovely story.

The way you wrote the sex scene is sooo hot! I'm needing just that ☺️