All Comments on 'A Fishing Trip, But I'm The Bait Ch. 07'

This story is entirely concerning on this site and even deserve a place of honor.

It's funny, tender, poetic, erotic, natural and horny.

Metaphors are flavorful, nature is present, the narrative evolves and the bandwidth (descriptive) very thorough.

This is a good "Novel" ☺

...As this chapter mirrors my own 'coming to terms' with my mother over my transition and its in a different country even! [Sigh] I went through most of a HUGE box of tissues reading this and remembering... I had written my experiences down with my Mom some time ago, and I dug out those notes recently to start my own chapter 05, and it was just almost scary how close the conversations went. Thank you Girl... thank you :)

I am so in love with this story, I just can't bear for it to end! What a love story! 💓

I've read a lot of stories on this site over the many years I've been here...your talent is up there with the very best! For me, this is probably the most honest and accurate coming out story I have ever read. You just nailed the emotions of every character perfectly. You've taken the time to fully develop all of the characters, such that I feel I know them...that's no accident, it's thoughtfulness and talent. Simply a lovely story...

The communion with the world - that was amazing. Her primal centre, her goddess place.

Wow.