by luvthedesserts
That was the first time I have laughed while reading an erotica story. Nicely done.
I'm also kind of curious if his brother is such a shit why he was there to begin with...
But decent story...
You are becoming my favorite author on this site. It's nice to read grown up stories for grown ups.
I really enjoy the sarcasm and sharp wit in your stories. Thank you for recommending this one to me. Another new favorite.
Thank you. I have no idea what happened after they left him in the hospital. They're snowed in and too busy to care at the moment. I'm sure she'll send a text to him when he gets out of the hospital. Hopefully they have enough peanut butter to last until spring.
Thanks for the input and enjoying my demented mind.
What a contrast and funny. Well written and funny. Did I mention that? Entertaining all the way to the end. Only one question - What happened to the brother?
Rugrat60
The story was excellent, but when they finally hit the sack I was let down, I guess I enjoy a little more detail with the sex scenes.. otherwise great story!
A very well-told story of an ordinary bloke. I was chuckling in several places with your use of image.
DO NOT STOP WRITING please.
HP
A damn good, old fashioned romp.....
Just LOVE your stories - P L E A S E keep on writing...........
P.S.
Watch out for any split infinitives........:-)
Genuinely had tears of laughter from reading this. I could imagine bill murray or jack nicholson playing this role in a film
loved it, more please
Brilliant! You should write for a living. Or maybe you do and erotica is just a hobby. Either way, well done.
Oh, one minor comment. Watch for homophones in the editing process. Your for you're, for example. Small ripples in an otherwise smooth stream.