All Comments on 'A Flash of Lace'

Great story...well told and possibly room for a continuation.

bitch in this story. Since she couldn't have Keith, she drug up the old memories of Davies childhood and then she secuded him into dressing permentally as a woman and set him up with Keith/Kay. What a wicked bitch she turned out to be. With a sister like that, Davie should not let her stay there anymore. I guess as an older sister, she just had to have her way no matter what the cost is and to who it affects. Dianna, go get screwed by you new lover and I hope all of your kids turn out to be gay/lesbisns and you have to live with the fact of what you did to your brother and ex-boyfriend.

Wow... Dianne is a very loving sister, to care about her brother so much. I don't care what anyone else thinks, she did the right thing. It's a beautiful story, and I'd love to see a continuation, maybe a story of what her NEW BOYFRIEND would think if he were to EVER find out that Kay was her former boyfriend and Celine her brother... But then again, the new boyfriend might end up being turned into a girl too, lol. Maybe Keith/Kay or Celine/Davie will go all the way and get the opperation to become a full woman, and then a marriage might take place...? if it's Davie who gets the surgery, then I could see Dianne donating an egg so that Celine can have a child.

loverly story, so tender and erotic. a nice change from the usual boy-to-girl stories. Wish she was my sister!

A darling tale, one with a very nice ending and lots of love in between. What a wonderful sister Di is. If only more understood as she.

such a lucky trio

If only there more more sisters like this. my panties are soaked and so are my cheeks. This story touched me...all over!

This story was AMAZING.

I do wish MY sister was more like Di.

I hope you'll keep writing stories as lovelt as this one.

Has all the components of a great story: entertaining plot; real obstacles to generate tension; fully drawn characters that we can care about; the right amount of colorful details; unexpected twists; and, a satisfying conclusion.

All held together by excellent writing. A work you should be proud of. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Diana is like the fairy godmother from Cinderella and the story is similar, but without the 'turning into a pumpkin at midnight' clause. Would have given a rating of 100% but the punctuation errors in and around the speech in the text were too consistently annoying.

If you would just have someone edit your stories or learn how to punctuate, I'd probably give you a top rating. Would like to see more from you but, maybe something different than the 2 fems discovering themselves and each other. You've done that well enough.

My dear you have written two of the most wongerful stories i'vee ever read i can't begin to tell how wonderful they are . my god just plain outstanding please keep writting. Hugsssss Peggy Logan

That was a wonderful story! I nearly cried! Who cares about punctuation errors... I gave it a 100! xoxo Stacie

even though it completely ignored the effect of hormones on bone structure and only very briefly treated body hair and voice whilst going into a lot of detail about other aspects. The tenderness and understanding described in the story were wonderful and in a way the story said something about our human condition - putting the 'lit' back into Literotica, so to speak. And a lovely change to 'Wb&tym'porn.

I hope you write more with these characters, please!

R.

I wonder if there's a Di out there for me.

Wonderful story

I wish author's would just preface stories if they are going to go gay, nothing kills a great story then 2 dudes going at it, I don't care how it happens it's an INSTANT kill-joy... What a shame, its like I want to just take end toss it out the window and end the right way with a beautiful lesbian ish closing. Or if you want it to be super kinky he gets with his sister.

To the Anonymous idiot from the bad ole USA.

You're an idiot. And a bloody hypocrite too.

Not only were Kay and Celine clearly not gay, being very obviously non-op transsexuals, and more than just crossdressers, (I'm sorry, but no straight male crossdresser lives as a woman 24/7, they're transgendered women who don't need an op), but YOU you pompous asshole, are complaining about the supposed story ruining effect of women with cocks having sex when you're in the bloody transsexuals story section?

This was a great story. It isn't any fault of the author that ruined it for you, all that ruined it for you is your own ignorance.

Time and time again I've seen people reading stories in ANY section on literotica and then complaining about how the story is sick because it wasn't the particular kink they were looking for. It's like people reading in the gay section and complaining about incest or vice versa. If you don't like a particular kink you end up finding in a story, just move on. Don't trash something that's well written just because you aren't part of the target audience. It's not like literotica provides a good classification system anyway.

This was a pretty hot story. You do write very well. One thing you may want to do is to see if you can have someone else help you proofread. They can often catch stuff you miss. Too often your mind will automatically correct errors since you are so close to the story.

Overall, it was a great story though.

It seems like the the dream of most cross dressers to be accepted by a female, and who better to both encourage, teach, and make what seems to be such a drive in our dream of acceptance, than the very one who played a big part in our want for the dream of being pretty, A sister. Not necessarily gay, in fact as a female most cross dressers would be gay because they are still attracted to Women. they are just wanting to express the soft pretty side of who they are and can be. As a part time cross dresser, who has an understanding wife in this matter, I spend much of my life as a very masculine man, but when the mood strikes and i am able to dress as a female it lets me show a side of myself that i believe my wife finds both refreshing and at times intriguing, while at the same time allowing me to express my softer feminine side giving my strength a rest for awhile.

I should preface this by saying I'm from the US, and I normally tend to avoid "romantic" stories, and that yes, I stumbled across this looking for quick wank material.

This one, however, caught me by surprise. This story is very touching, and very well done, and just... I could go on, but I won't.

Good show.

I think this is the best story on cross dressing I have ever read on Literotica,,

i felt so happy and feminine, just reading this,,

thank you so much Author!

And it is either the saddest or happiest. Just which, I am not sure. Well done!

Thank you for bringing back so many happy and exciting memories of my childhood and growing up with my older sister in a quiet English village. Feel inspired to write my own story. x

A highly unexpected and touching story about self discovery and revelation. I only wish it were longer!

If loving a man was going to be like that, a lot of us would enjoy the experience.

Such a romantic warm story.

I hope it has truth.

luv

Moddle

I really enjoyed this story - a very clever twist to it, and it was so well constructed. I look forward to reading more stories from you.

Such a great story. Very sensual and sexy at the same time. Can't wait to read more.

Terrific, entertaining and sensual story. It drew one in and kept one interested throughout. Fabulous writer.

I actually cried you are amazing!

What a super romantic story

this is the best story i have ever read on here! wish i was her!

What a wonderful story! There are so many things about it that I like. Diane's total acceptance and then active participation in Celine's transformation. Her tossing clothes to her "brother," and her gales of laughter when "he" tossed his boxers onto her head. Her introducing Celine to Kay. Knowing that her former lover and her "sister" were made for each other. That Kay turned out to be Keith was a total twist! I'm glad that Kay knew about Celine and that they both had fallen in love with each other. When Kay came out to Celine, things could have gotten ugly. I didn't really expect anything bad to happen since Celine was so much in love, but I was very happy for them when they were able to let their love for each other take them both to the next level.

There was a part of me that thought each of them might start down the path of transition. Honestly, though, I think they would be happier as they were.

Thank you for an unusual and very romantic story.

Amber

Very romantic story. Very sweet! No BDSM or any of that other kinky shit. Just two gurls finding each other and falling in love!

very nice story

This story was so wonderful - and it had an unexpected but pleasant twist. With Kay being a man who, like Celine, wants to be a woman, made the story perfect. It's a lot like me - I'm a cross-dresser who realizes I really only want to be dressed like a woman and treated by one - especially sexually. I truly want to find a beautiful CD like me who has a big cock which I can suck and which can fuck my pussy. Please tell us more stories like this one - it was wonderful !!!

With more detail, some editing .....you've got a book here. LOVED IT JUST LIKE THE OTHER STORY!

While this was a lovely, erotic story, I do agree with most of the criticism. A little proofreading and editing would have helped make it more readable. Also, if a story is going to have two people with penises having intercourse, then it should be labeled as "homosexual" or "gay". Personally, I would have preferred it if Kay were a GG, not a pre-op TS. Also, the story began with Davie as a heterosexual CD; there was no evidence that Davie was a TS.

That said, as someone who also borrowed from his sister without her knowledge, I did enjoy the acceptance and encouragement by the sister and the description of the underwear and Davie's feelings when wearing it.

Dressing and romance. Such a lovely combination. So erotic. Keep 'em cumming!

this is how I would want to cum out.xx

This was THE most wonderful story. I has a hunch she would wind up dating Keith. ... and I would have been happy with that. But this was so much nicer.

Please tell me you're single! I want a special CD of my own. Oh.... bet, from the clues, you're a Brit. .... pop by and see me anyway.

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I haven't finished your story yet, but that confession scene was truly remarkable. There are very few stories that I come across where I feel compelled to comment and rate before finishing the read, but this is certainly one of them. Well done! And as a personal aside, I really hope that you're British because that's how I've been reading this. <3

This is the second of your stories I've read, and like the first one, this one quickly pulled me into the characters and the plot line. With both stories I had to read right through to the end in one sitting, despite having stuff that I really should've been doing!

I do have a criticism however. I hope you won't be offended, but you're using your speech marks wrongly, which sometimes means stopping and re-reading a passage to make sense of it. I strongly recommend that you get someone to show you how to do it properly because you're such a good writer, and this small niggle could hold you back.

I very much look forward to reading your next story :)

Read this story several years ago. Enjoyed it both times. would like to see more stories from you. stories are written as they could really happen. keep writing.

Awww, that was soo cyoot 💜😊💜

I love this story so much.

This is a cross-dressers dream fantasy. I love that the sister is the one who helps him...

Great story

This story is a work of art. It is 100% believable and this gurl wished my sister was like Dianne instead of who she really is. Thank you for a wonderful story.

This as good as My Initiation. Both are filled with love and acceptance of who they really are.

I Definitely Enjoyed reading the entire story, even when Both of them turned out to be guys because I consider myself to be a Lesbian Male. I've got absolutely NO interest (sexually) in other males, but I've ALWAYS been sexually attracted to girls and women, especially with their Lovely Feminine Lingerie!

Another beautiful story and again I have loved reading it from start to finish, every chapter is a delight. You form such beautiful characters that it is a joy to follow them on their individual journeys.

Hugs and Kisses

Kathryn .. 💋

You write such good stories that I would have liked to been able to read more.

A wonderful and moving story. Thank you.

Beautiful. Magical. This story appeared in the random section. I will read your other works. A gentle and loving transition, well written and emotional. I had tears. The revelation of Keith/Kay was nicely done. Lovely. 5 <3 from me. luv Chloe x

Loved it. It pretty much describes how I wish my life had turned out.