All Comments on 'A Flight to Remember'

I bet the narrator was pissed off that her girlfriend Karla got off with this other chick called Tracy instead of her!

Well that's how it reads. Decide if you are writing in first or third person - don't mix them up.

That aside, the story was okay.

Great story, I really liked it ;-)

Hopefully you'll write more.

i loved it...definately turned me on..you should cntinue to write like this..i LOve it

This was a great start and, by the way, welcome to Literotica! I really enjoyed your story, and hope that it's only the beginning of, at least, a sequel, and hopefully, a series! Either way, keep writing, and we'll kepp reading.

I didn't mean to mix 1st and 3rd person here. I started writing it one way then picked up the next day and wrote it in 3rd person. I kept meaning to go back and change it but I forgot. :/

lol.

but thanks for not like, being an ass about it.