by amazingrace69
I loved the slow build up, and the ending was very powerful. Laura is a hot, convincing character.
Loved the story also because I have seen what the characters have seen, making it that much more powerful! Possibly another chapter??
I hate it when the characters on this site use horrible, ugly condoms. I prefer the man to take the lead and seduce the lady, who should show some reluctance. It was a good read though, just the same.
He cared about her their love was blissful and they loved each other and they just had started liking each other that how u know u love a person at first site sorry it mite not go with my title but hope u like it