All Comments on 'A Fond Farewell'

Its a nice story and I would have liked a proper ending where either he does do a runner and not see Steffi again or make it more romantic in that she had only been in the town 2 years so had no real ties, Steffi could decide to go with him where his new job is and raise a family and she could stick two fingers up to mister Wright and say I have found my mr right.

But the sex happens too fast. There's no buildup. There's no real recognition by her that he's a virgin. There's no teaching him about a woman's body and what she likes. For someone who's never done it before, he's awfully knowledgeable.

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How come most male writers are experts on bra sizes? Too much wanking over the Victoria's Secrets catalogue methinks.