All Comments on 'A Forced Encounter'

I like this kind of story. It is exciting. I know you write a celebrity erotic stories. Hope you can make a story about a burglar in Nicole Kidman's or Cindy Crawford's house sniffing their dirty panties from the humper, then he got caught by the celebrity. Then with the gun pointing at the celebrity sniffs the crotch of the panties they are wearing and then their bare pussies. It would be nice if it smells musky, pungent and intoxicating. That is the smell of a real pussy even if they are a rich and famous celebrities and wearing a lacy string bikini designer panties. They also have a fish hiding their clitoral hood. It could be also a consented one and let him have intercourse with them. let me know. rodav555@hotmail.com

You could use a bit more editing, but the story line was GREAT....I love stories like this.

These type of far fetched scenarios are perfect for fiction and even more so for written literature. I'd love to see more from you in this same vein.

I will write a story about Nicole Kidman for you

This is by far the best story I've read here, I loved the tension, the interaction between characters, where they're coming from and how sexual attraction between Sandra and Sam grows gradually, it actually kind of reminded me Speed: "I have to warn you,relationships built on extreme situations never work!"

Well that extreme situation definitely worked for me and I hope to read more of the good stuff, maybe something like an erotic version of Speed ;))

A 5***** storyline. Really enjoyable.

OMG I'd love a woman like Sandra.

This made no sense at all, "When she informed her bosses that she and William were going to separate, they said that being Jews, they do not believe in divorce."

First of all, what does this have to do with the story? Second of all, what in the weird world of antisemitic stereotypes did this come from? Jews, because it was the diamond business?! Thirdly, why would bosses be involved in an employee's personal life? Fourthly, if you are going to invoke a historically oppressed group in your story, at least get their culture right. Jews can get divorced. There is even a Jewish divorce agreement and the husband must free the wife of her tie to him.

You are a good writer with a creative way of building characters. I urge you to examine what implicit biases led you to add this unnecessary and inaccurate detail into your story. And next time, just ask one Jew.