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cookiejarcookiejarover 19 years ago
Very well written...

Almost a fantsy feel to it. A welcome change, more erotica than porn. I have wrote a few in the same vein. My only complaint(and it's a small one) is the word smelt. I like smelled much better, it somehow sounds prettier. :) Good work!

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