All Comments on 'A Formerly Shy Person Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
excellent in so many ways

don't know if you're M or F and don't care, there seem to be some elements of truth woven into a narrative that kept me going for all six chapters. very few moments where a reader can say, well that's just fiction. we all went thru that age, and l wish l haad enjoyed it as much as susan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
*Waist

One of my pet peeves. Below the waist. Not below the waste. Waste is garbage. Waist is the smallest part of your torso.

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