by AnonymousPerv
Genuinely interesting, for smut at the very least. Well written enough for me to leave my first comment saying so after all these numerous years on the site! I like the black mirror/ twilight zone-esque ending.
Your stories are so good ... and so frustrating. From a literary POV I think they mostly end right on time. Unfortunately, by the time they reach their HEA ending, I feel like I know the characters well enough to want to hear more about what they get up to.
One of the most original stories I've read in a long time. This was a fascinating read into Charlie's psyche. I hope for a second part or epilogue to finish the story.
I throughly enjoyed this story and really would love to read a part two, or three, or as many original ideas as you can produce
I enjoyed this story, it had an interesting slant and whilst it was hot, I would have liked more details and more nasty sex.
It was well written and flowed easily.