by Wifetheif
I expected the full psycho asshole treatment. It was more of a lover's tryst. My only question is when did he take the viagras? :)
While I'm not a fan of adultery, at least you didn't write about permanently destroying a marriage.
I think that Rick should have given up Marcella, and Allison should have ended her marriage to Bob. Obviously, Rick and Allison should have been together and married.
The reality is that she went to the police and he went to jail for years. I hate stupid stories.
And all the money he inherited went to her and he enjoyed a LOT of anal sex...in prison.
What is with your passion with using upper case letters? Not to mentions stories which are too short?
Initial idea “why” is plausible.
I appreciated particularly that the main character decided to play easy during the three days.
No violence or equal.
Go ahead and write more stories!
I pretty much agree with GlennO,
but I gave it ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ anyway.
And, like WhiteStockings said,
it was better with him treating her like a treasure
instead of a trinket.
I guess I like the kind of stories
where a guy has gal over the barrel,
but treats her nicely
and makes her love it, anyway (ANY way??).
[The exception being when a man is given an opportunity like Rick was, but with a former wife/girlfriend who is compelled to do what she would not do before (eg. blowjobs) especially if she likes it and regrets her former withholding.]
Just a few of my viewpoints/propensities.
Paul in Oklahoma
I loved the story! I am sure that Allison and Rick with repeat the weekend several times over. Great story. I gave it 5 stars
Everyone wondered what happened when Rick disappeared. Then Bob kicked Allison out with a warning that if she talks to anyone about why, she will disappear like Rick. The truth always comes out. The scumbag "friend" and whore wife deserve much punishment.
Some friend, but it’s just a story……. I think he was just fucking her too many times and pretty much nothing else to be true.