All Comments on 'A Friend Indeed Pt. 02'

was it supposed to switch from jen to els pov?

I did switch the POV from Jennifer to Ellie since Jen was about to fall asleep. ; )

When do we get part 3???

Such a hot storyline. I loved the different angles and the slow-burn buildup. Lesbian truth or dare can be so cliche but I never doubted what these girls were feeling at all. The way things unfolded between Ellie and Jenn was very believable and very hot. And there's so much left to happen for these girls. All four of them. There's lots of summer left... How long will it really take Jenn to figure out what she wants and maybe realize what she is. As for Ellie, now that she's had a taste of what she's fantasized about, not just with Jenn but girls in general, she could find herself navigating this secret, closeted relationship and fulfilling all of her fantasies in the process. And Ellie's path to girls would be fun to know, too. Too bad the site doesn't allow characters under 18 because I'm sure it started before then.

This one was great. Eagerly waiting for the part 3.

Have to have more, ASAP!!!

Can't wait to read part 3! You are a very talented writer.

This storyline is sooooo hot I can't wait for the next part!!

PLEASE LET THERE BE A PART 3 !

You have a lot of talent. Can't wait for the next part.

I agree with everyone. Please write another chapter. This is definitely hot and sexy.

You can't stop here... please give us more... Pt. 03... maybe more? Please?

That's it? A 5 star story dropped to 1 star as it has been over a year since you left us hanging.

Bummed, but I won't make the mistake of starting any of your other work as I don't want to get sucked in and then frustrated again.

Too bad, you might be a good writer...

You need to finish the story. We all need to know how it ends. Btw you sure a fantastic writer. Love it.

I so loved how you changed perspective in part 2. Now its time to pounce on my wife! Linda

You are a great writer. You owe your fans MORE! Not just this story, just write more for us.

I need part 3 of this story or I'm going lose my mind!!!!!!

Finish this story!

Come on hon. You gotta finish this extraordinarily sexy tale! BTW, I've read everything that you've published on Literotica at least TWICE. I love your work.

The entire episode was completely plausible (unlike so many other stories I read here on Literotica). I totally believed I was there! The lack of oh-so-distracting grammatical errors was also very pleasantly refreshing.

Of course, it was hotter than the surface of the sun. And please, don't worry about the 3rd chapter. My imagination has already written it. Just as (I suspect) you intended.

I think I will be reading this one again and again. Thank you.

A nxt chapter seems to be the logical thing.

I know im not alone in willing you to return to this story.

I really enjoy your stories. They are reasonably realistic and very hot. Looking forward to chapter 3 or any other new stories you write.

Great insight into their minds, hot scene, horrible cliffhanger! :D

And just what would that be?

Again - Hot Story!!!

I hope you will return to this series and finish it!

More please! Another really good story! Where does it go from here!